Black Poetry : V-V-VvIiBbRrAaTtIiOoNnSs

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  1. N2urSoul

    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    TwoDay I hang the ssssounds of a new name on my heart
    and cut the chain of another anchor that **** near drowned me in misery

    YESterday I dressed my soul in b-b-blue dye so that EyE would think I was depressed about a sunken relation (ship)

    You can hear anything you want --
    if you take the time to truly listen ...

    ... I heard the metal shaking on the door
    as it closed behind his exit -- it trembled softly

    ... and I listened to the way the concrete v-v-v-vibrated when
    he walked ----- out of my life

    ... I heard rhythm inside of a rhythm as it thumped
    releasing my aching heart-- letting it beat at a slower pace

    Then I Snnnnaaapppeeeedd my fingers twice ~ *click*click
    and broke the spell of a hypnotic trance
    that weighed heavy on my mind

    He wasn't the one for me
    Not even half the man I expected

    So I let gooooooo
    and fell over one
    of the
    VvIiBbRrAaTtIiOoNnSs
    my soul carries--
    it's called 'N'tuition ...
    A device that comes
    natural to most women

    It's Within - within

    In order for a man to catch
    my vibe
    He's got to be
    N'tune ~ listening closer than close
    and he must know how
    to keep me
    happ-E




    (c) 2001 SOULOFASISTA
     
  2. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    WOW!!

    N2 I LISTEN INTENTLY SO CLOSE I FEEL WHAT U SAY
    AND THE WAY U WALKED
    SEE SO MANY YET NOT KNOW HOW TOO DO WHAT U DID
    NOW THATS A STRONG WOMAN .......U HEADED UPTOWN
    NOW TOO A NEW LOVE WHOM FEEL DA VIBE OF U .....HUMMMM!!
     
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    cocobutterskyn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    N2

    Letting go of a man you love knowing he's not the one for you. Some find it so difficult to do. I cried an entire year morning my husband, our marriage, our love that had die, but I was strong, didn't go back and overcame. I wanted to be happy. This is a strengthening poem. Thanks for sharing your strength.

    Mad Sistahly Love
    CCBSKYN
     
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    Right, Right

    I feel ya
    Sis most definately
    Hey, Nice to see ya too
    I havn't talk to you for awhile
    but how ya been
    Dats good
    Keep on keeping on
    It's hard I know
    Man, maybe this is a foreshadow
    Idonno,
    Sincerely,
    Desert Storm
     
  5. N2urSoul

    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    $$RICH$$

    It's remarkable to know that you can "feel" just what I'm saying... you've caught a V I B E full of N2!

    As for now & forever more -- I say, Thank YOU!


    One :heart:
     
  6. N2urSoul

    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Coco

    Yep... sometimes letting go of the misery is what IS needed in order to progress towards "happiness"!
    Sista friend... I'm glad you could draw 'strength' from these words!

    Peace
    N2
     
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    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Que pasa amiga?
    Nada con mi ....

    Certainly am happy to see
    your scribez again, and am also
    glad you could relate to this
    piece heah!....

    Stay Regular! :wink:

    One Luv.
     
  8. MapleXtract

    MapleXtract Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I agree...

    [SIZE=huge]...with coco, 100%
    this is, definitely, a strengthening
    piece.
    [/SIZE]
    [SIZE=huge]You have an amazing way with words, ma...:D[/SIZE]
     
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    Heartbeat Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Very nice peace.
     
  10. N2urSoul

    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    MapleX~

    Your responses are always welcome sistah....

    I thank you for taking the time to read.... and yes, I most definitely agree - this piece is an inspiring one!


    One.