Black Poetry : u'v tuchd me

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  1. daroc

    daroc Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    u'v tuchd me

    ur there
    u have reached me
    u tuch my insides
    so deep
    too deep
    as if u were me....
    inside

    ur warmth
    ur soul
    comforts me
    consoles me

    is it really u who has reached me
    or is it me
    for i feeel as i am won
    with you

    ur mind
    controls me
    mine sucumbs to ur love
    teach me

    please school me on all ur lessons
    im willin
    yearnin
    wanting
    to pull my knowledge
    from with in u

    give me that all u own
    all u posses
    all which possesses urs
    for i want all

    not won or sum
    push harder
    try
    continue
    dont stop
    for u have touched that spot

    my insides
    are melting
    from u
    i thot i was ready
    but
    im not

    but.......
    but......
    but......
    PLEASE!!!!!
    please dont stop.....

    keep pushin
    scratchin
    rubbin
    massagin

    yes, right thur
    that which feeds my soul
    is ur love

    oooooo...... please
    dig deeper
    for u have already touched my
    caressed mine

    my brain is throbbing
    from such confuse shun
    all these emotions

    heart felt
    can u
    feel my heart fall
    bleedin blood red
    yearnin for u

    my heart fell
    and i
    never imagined
    it

    but....
    but.......
    PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
    plaese dont stop

    cuz ur there
    u reached my insides
    so deep in
    as if u were me.......
    inside


     
  2. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    very nice inner emotions release
    Angel
     
  3. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I like the way you brought this feeling of someone who is within your heart so deeply it's as though you're one....very nice.
     
  4. jazzymoonchild

    jazzymoonchild Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Very, very nice, poet. Do your thing
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    ahhhhh!! yes sweet release captivated
    flow head
     
  6. daroc

    daroc Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks for the love yall give it is so appreciated
     
  7. queentswana

    queentswana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    We hear you loud and clear, here's hoping that he not only hear...but feel it as well. tight write...well done, thanks for pulling us in.
     
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    caramelpython Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I loved this joint sis u write very lovely! :spin:
     
  9. daroc

    daroc Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks queen and python
     
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    angelicsage Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    lots of movement
    in this peace
    great expression of
    the desperation of love
    with all the confusion
    of emotions going back
    and forth...wanting it
    so badly although your drowning
    and still you do not care...
    because it feels so...good
    love, passion and desire a powerful combination

    *whew*...

    Tyte flow...Daroc....Very Tyte Flow