Black Poetry : UTOPIA

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  1. theGlobe

    theGlobe Member MEMBER

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    Where can I go with.............these feet of mine?
    Where can I go, knowing.....myself and others don't?
    Where in due time they would find I'll be a comfort zone
    Where can I stay knowing a pleasant place I could call home?
    Where men won't chase me with knives & guns despite my air gun
    Where can I go where people would just accept me for what I really am?
    Where I can ink the sky and not seen as an alien in a planet that I am not
    Where I can speak out in peace without attracting much anger & hatreds
    Where I can spill my deep thoughts without harming any not intended at
    Where I can lay my hat & lie peacefully knowing my back is not stabbed
    Where can I find this Utopia in the mass cities of gruesome spite ness?
    Where I can stay where the folks are kind and understanding
    Where I can lodge during this distance travel of mine
    Where is this place that I dream of to be at?
    Where can this place possibly be?
    Where I can finally be at
    Am I there yet?
    Utopia?
    ?​
     
  2. rasheed

    rasheed Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Feeling your flow, nice artistic word heart, already seeking the same place with the promise, "Seek and you shall find"

    Peace and Blessings
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Visually and mentally captivating...wow.
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :wave: welcome to destee...
    now i am diggin this flow ....
    bring us some more....Angel
     
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    Hi:wave: Welcome to the family
    of love and embrace
    i want you to know that this
    is indeed beautiful....
    Artist as well as touching
    looking forward reading more
    of your flows
    Peace
    Blue :heart:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    welcome welcome welcome

    welcome to destee.com poetic playground
    welcome to the new home u found
    welcome from above as i bless da scribe
    love is in da air tyte drop as love given sho love
    :wave: :wave: :wave: :wave: :wave: :lol:
     
  7. theGlobe

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    rasheed
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    Thank you all for your welcoming words and already I feel the warmth and comfort glowing off from all your words. I only hope to grow poetically through all your constant encouragements. Thank you ones more...
     
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