Black Poetry : ...utopia...(1st post)

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  1. LiLi

    LiLi Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    hello all! i'd like to say that i have read some very talented writing here! i haven't responded yet but fully intend to!!


    UTOPIA

    perception the evil twin of knowledge perfectly acceptable in a blind eye like Aesop read topically it's deficient...between the rhetoric and my tangents lies a question...is the Bible the greatest story ever told? ...or On Walton's Mountain?...some of us won't get either cause of what was done...chittlins and pork fried rice hand in hand is what we claim we're hopin for...the lines of our face bends when it's delivered to our door...

    a sip of Courvoisier or Soco diminishes impressions increases dissention lotus flower with imperfections carefully pruned from conception...

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    “The law of the wise is the fountain of life” ~ i read this somewhere vestige of a dying man...some believe in the big plan, the big bang theory or Christ's leanings...we're all bearing a cross of scars i grow weary of debate over the cause...you're my fellow man when it suits you and i guess you're the same to me sometimes too…zirconia smiles spread for miles replaceable tiles on the ground we walk upon...the words you think effect me like xenon...but perhaps i merely misunderstood...

    eye conversation with a stranger brings about chain-gang thinkin bored man blinkin lost failed reachin face value teachin poor man speakin

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    i've hit the ceiling...


    criticism welcome!!
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    welcome welcome welcome!!!

    hey LiLi as i welcome u from da sky
    as u flow a poetic show welcome
    within upon destee's playground
    with family & friendz ......
    :D :wave: :wave: :wave: :wave: :wave: :star:
    stay and roam around share a few smile
    as i stay in flyte above whispering words of love
    welcome friend wit dis tyght flow....
     
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    THEN teach me, LiLi...to weather DESTINY...and see what you see. BEHOLD. life is a continuous succession of what should be...when we look into the eye of the stranger...versely conversing in utopian rhyme schemes...it seems appropriate that we smile the mind's eye smile of the wild and wicket...coz, in the deep, dark, thicket of things to come...there are those who would be KING and QUEEN...and SOME...who wouldn't.

    WELCOME to the land of the free {spirit}.

    WELCOME to DESTEE'S playground.
    THANKS for joining the playground crew...YES, YOU.:)

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    This circumstance is a blessing
    your intelligence manifesting
    a higher level, in these words, revel
    in perception and awareness
    make connections as you share this
    realization
    glad to see this new creation
    and a new face with a bright smile
    welcome! sit back and stay awhile...

    1luv
     
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    i have neither flowery word nor lengthy praise
    only simple adoration for the one who can see with the minds eyes and speak with the hearts tongue.
    as u traverse here in the land of the free and uninhibited
    may ur presence be continuous and constant and a blessing
    welcome and take a load off!:0
     
  6. LiLi

    LiLi Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    you guys are too much
    and have offered realization
    that before i felt a dream
    a circumstance of my own creation
    a revelation of no grounding or roots
    beyond my own mindscape and vision of truth

    LOL...I TRULY LOVE all of your responses!! the creative way that you offer good will! much love and thanks!!
     
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    YEAH YEAH!!!
    FEELIN DA FLOW POET.....
    KEEP EM COMIN....LOOKIN OUT FO' DA TALENTED.......!!
     
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    Welcome Welcome Welcome

    This was simply an excellent scribe although I wont pretend to have understood every subtly of your flow I do know that you have said a mouth full and I will attempt to digest the rest the next few times I read it.

    Glad you brought your voice to this house you will be appreciated here.
     
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    ther is so much of life we'd dare to understand and how we'd trample round as if a contraband in fears of if we stand we'd ultimately fall and someone please tell me something if any thing at all .... about this this quest unto which we hear call .... there are so many things that may seem small beside unsurmountable mountains that rise tall then faintly fall

    ....

    then i should wonder of Paul the great preacher on how he'd obtain certain features lest he stand out amoung us beautiful creatures ... i find self weary think i'll sat out on the bleechers
    unto i search for lifes consumate teacher...... hurld in space seem to be beyond the stretch in which i could reach ya .... not a race of whether i betcha..... i just pray that i metch !!!!!
     
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    welcome LiLi ..... it has been a pleasure for me among everyone here at destee.... though short it has been fulfilling indeed ...i feel as if i found a home .... hope u feel the same.
     
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