Black Poetry : USER (*use her)

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  1. N2urSoul

    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Why do you
    dismiss me
    when I need you
    but you can re-collect me
    for your added -
    convenience?

    Forgive me for my
    PASSIVEagressiveDELUSIONALLYinfusedCONFUSION
    it appears at times when
    I feel I have intruded
    and from the way you subtly eluded
    I know when I am in demand
    - cause you call...
    I should inform you
    that use(her) de(man)d
    is not "user" friendly overall

    Show me consistency//cohesiveness
    a plan to work from and to
    a conceptualized understanding
    of
    what,
    why,
    and how we are supposed to be
    ..."or not to be"...
    that's still the question
    -posed, but it remains unanswered
    interaction between "we" should be the
    result of respect
    granted
    mutually

    Let me get out of the way
    I can't fly in this
    "NO ZONE"
    any longer
    my-wings-have-been-clipped!

    I'm paying attention
    I see the obvious
    in my view...a
    Useful
    User
    Uses
    US
    subtracting and editing
    the appearance of a word
    -until there are
    no more~...nothing's left
    and we too
    will
    cease and desist

    serves my memory well
    because I must
    remember
    that
    truthfully
    "WE"
    really
    never
    did
    exist
     
  2. MADDRAPPER

    MADDRAPPER Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    (PEEP)

    THIS WAS REALLY NICE LOVING THIS PART KEEP ON FLOWING THIS STUFF

    Forgive me for my
    passiveagressiveinfusedconfusion
    it appears at times when
    I feel I have intruded
    I know this cause you subtly eluded
    I know when I am in demand
     
  3. Desert Storm

    Desert Storm Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I Already Know What I Need To Say

    I'm feelin you on this one sis. Some "people" just want to have their cake and eat it too and that ain't right. YOu feelin me? Gurl,I feelin yo pain. I was in a relationship similar to yours last year. And it just recked my nerves like you would believe!(((UNDERGROUND))). Some thangs only sistah talk about! Ya Heard Me? Well,Keep keepin on. What goes around comes around. You did what you could do and that's all that matters. If he want's to loose a good friendship and very sincere person then that's on him. But whoeva he is will REGRET IT for days. I bet there are many who would love to be in his shoes. But anyways. Ya know what I'm sayin.
    I'm holdin you in ma prayers gurl,Everythang's goin to be alright. Continues to keep yo head up!
    Desert Storm
    Sistah Power!
     
  4. N2urSoul

    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Madrapper~

    Thank you for telling me
    which part of this prose you
    liked!

    I'm glad I evoked your
    thoughts...
    thanks for the comps!
     
  5. N2urSoul

    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Storm~

    Thank YOU for the consideration and support that you provided in your response!

    I guess I must have been "EMOTIONALLY Charged" when I wrote this - ya' know; ready 2 Xplode or something?!
    Some things brothas just don't realize, and at times
    I think they may never truly understand
    a woman's feelings
    when
    she's
    FALL-ing
    for him
    they aren't quite sure
    how to Lift us UP -yet
    and I pray that one day they will ....

    Until then, all I say is -
    "I can't miss what I could never measure in the first place"!
    Thank you sista - for reading & understanding ME!!
     
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    Desert Storm Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Unwillingness to Admit their Weakness....

    WEll,I guess for the most part especially black cats if you know what I mean Are to prideful and unwilling to admit at times that they just DON'T KNOW HOW,They keep it inside and you never know. Some things that go left unsaid,that they want to say but never do. I think since women in general are more emotional the guys try not to be so emotional when they really are or something like that! Well,I'm not going to try to figure men at,that's fa sho. They are what they are. And we are what we are so. Ya know,what more else can you do or say except to except that,that's the way it is. But that's what makes me love brothas so much. And I still have nothin but love cuz they do the best they can,even when it seems like they are juggling the world on their shoulders. But for the most part they CARE FOR US deeply without measure. And sistah you and I both know and can agree on dat one. RIght?
    WEll,all I can do is have compassion ,
    Always and Sincerely,
    Desert Storm
     
  7. N2urSoul

    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Storm~

    Nuttin' but luv!
    I've got lotz of dat fo' da brothas -
    "one or two bad apples can't/won't spoil
    the bunch!" OKAY!!

    I hear ya' though -
    and yes - we are all -Individualistically inclined
    whether that be good or bad....
     
  8. blakverb

    blakverb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    tyght scribe! deep/heavy/**** good.

    one love, blak
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    WELL SAID YA FLOW IS FELT
    GOT ME EMOTIONALLY UP ON DES
    SOME MEN JUST DONT KNOW
    OR DONT CARE.....U CAN FALL IN LOVE
    BUT NOT SEEN YET HE SEE U AND CAN'T
    SAY A WORD........BUT I FEEL YA HERE
    NICE...
     
  10. N2urSoul

    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Glad you enjoyed the read!

    $$RICH$$

    I'm glad this got you emotionally
    charged, as it did for me when I
    wrote it!
     
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