Black Poetry : Useless pleasure

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  1. LibertyLady

    LibertyLady Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I often ask myself ..
    does it gives you such Pleasure saying hatefull
    things that hurt.?
    Smiling and lauging with me....
    i turned around and you throw a big stone at me
    Does it gives you such pleasure.....
    to paint a bad picture off me ...
    and show it to youre friends...
    instead of drawning the real me?

    Does it make you feel good on for a moment?
    yes?

    How about a few minutes later?
    an hour...
    or the day after that?
    How does it feel than?

    Does it feel good to hurt the one you love?

    One thing i know 4 sho..
    It gives the devil so much Pleasure...
    to see you get end up with a lot of hurt
    because of the hurt you give to others.
    And it gives him much more Pleasure....
    to see how he destroys sumthing
    that is beautifull.
    And it gives him even So much more Pleasure...
    to see how you Dont see that he is using U

    for his own ...

    Pleasure..
     
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    ooooh gyrl!!! you said it then!!!!!!! and this is not just limited to intimate men & women relationships, but relationships period. we tear one another down so much, and there's no better way to describe it than "Usless Pleasure!" we need to open our eyes so that we may see what it is we are doing. this was a really really good drop. keep on flowing, poet.

    ~Kim~
     
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    LibertyLady Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thanks cindy (little angel)and kim (sista)yes thanks you got the poem....
    it not about men& woman...only its all people...its about ..how ...that bad force i dont even want to call his name sumthimes is using people ...cause his time on earth here is short
    bless ya
     
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    many can't see pass what lay in front of them often past by
    and use wrongful tongue to hurt those before them
    shameful minded thing..........will it ever stop!!?
     
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    the wrong that people do always come back to claim them. Stay strong and keep your eyes opened. What ever he said about you someone has or will say about him
     
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    LibertyLady Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks Purplemoons :heart:







    Love l
     
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    LibertyLady Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    and Rich :heart:
     
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    The devil wears many masks...Nicely put.
     
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    The Pleasure Principle

    LibertyLady, I admire you, and your work speaks volumes!
     
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