Black Poetry : Use Your Senses.....

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  1. SwtT

    SwtT Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    How does it feel?

    Like warm honey being spread over your thighs?
    Like a feather being ran over your spine?
    Like fingers in your hair?
    Like someone stabbing you softly?
    Like a newborns hands?
    How does it feeL?
    ...You tell me.

    How does it smell?
    Like the aroma of a "Glade" candle?
    Like Sweet vanilla?
    Like sliken soap?
    Like fresh roses?
    Like warm massage oil?
    How does it smell?
    ...You tell me.

    How does it look?
    Like the Northern Lights?
    Like a city at night?
    Like a cat on a windowsill?
    Like a smile?
    How does it look?
    ...You tell me.

    How does it taste?
    Like a popsicle?
    Like a sweet cherry?
    Like a hot pepper?
    Like chocolate?
    Like a strawberry?
    How does it taste?
    ...You tell me?

    How does it Sound?
    Like a child whimpering?
    Like a train coming on the tracks?
    Like a volcano erupting?
    Like someone laughing?
    Like the boom of thunder?
    How does it sound?
    ...You tell me

    How does it feel,smell,look,taste. & sound?
    Like the smooth lines on a man's back?
    Like burning strawberry incense?
    Like dark brown eyes filled with wonder?
    Like the sweat n sour of a french kiss?
    Like a soft purr of a cat?
    ...So how is it?
    How far does it drive YOUR senses to it's peak?
     
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    Booty-licious delicious, that's how!
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    wow! my mouth is hung
     
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    This was sensually erotic! I like I like!!!
     
  5. SwtT

    SwtT Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    he he he 1poet you are so crazy :laugh:

    :eek: OMG i got RICH SPEECHLESS!!...well then...time to pack up my pen n paper n leave b/c I justr accomplished my mission :laugh:

    Thank you Alize :heart: Glad you liked it
     
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    Hey SwtT,

    WOW!! Nothing more needs to be said!!

    ~Sierra~:heart:
     
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    :) well, well, well...u gotz the screen steamin :)
     
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    SwtT Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Sierra & triniti :) :) Thank you.. Thats the whole ponit :grin:..after all that...there should be no more words...know what I mean? :devil:
     
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