Black Poetry : Us

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by insol33, Jan 5, 2005.

  1. insol33

    insol33 Member MEMBER

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    I thought about you in a dream drifting, sifting, feeling, the things that I felt
    You touched me
    And felt the thoughts I had deep inside
    Like no other,

    How did you get there? As I reached out and became one, you and I
    Looking into your eyes, I sunk… became lost, feeling the love that bound us together

    Tied like the string of a kite
    Spinning inseparable in tune like string pulled tight, sinking into that silky jazz like miles

    Everything we touch turned to gold and our hands were all over each other
    The longing of minutes stretched like muscles early in the morning
    How it felt

    The need was met between us hot like Tabasco
    The love thick and wispy… cigar smoke
    Caught in a glass, filling my lungs my insides so full of you
    Exhale

    And breathe deep, hollow like a full glass of water
    Cool soothing burning and satisfying
    I thought about you in dream that was real
     
  2. shaz

    shaz Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    very sexy write lovely flow
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    welcome welcome welcome!!!!

    :hearthis:
    welcome to destee.com poetic playground
    welcome to the lovin home u found
    welcome from above as i bless u some love
    tyte sizzling flow happy u shared a piece of ya art
    look to read more of u as love is given do share some love
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  4. queentswana

    queentswana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Dreams to remember ...this is a "jump-start" piece for the heart, nice write...and welcome to the real.
     
  5. gempis

    gempis Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Now that's some way to enter a web site! Welcome to the Destee family. Love your flow! Hope to read more from ya.
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    The depth of your metaphors captures the reader in your lovely words. This was awesome. Welcome to destee, I'm waiting to read more.