Black Poetry : Us, Together

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by rasheed, Jan 27, 2004.

  1. rasheed

    rasheed Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    When you need a bridge
    To span some difficulty
    To take you out of danger
    And take you to a safer shore
    i'll be the master craftsman
    Engineering it or even more
    Because i see in you sincerity
    And i'm not concerned you're just on the take
    You're in the struggle like i am
    i sense no part of you that's fake
    You'll do your part in every situation
    And you'll give your all for success
    Something from you lets me know
    i can give you my all
    There's no thought of doing less
    i'm your Adam and you my Eve
    If there were no others anywhere
    We could face this life together
    And each of us would do our share
    But there are others
    So it's so much better
    Than what it could have been
    We're complementary to the letter
    We together can only win
    And build together a massive bridge
    Over which millions can cross
    Out of the crafted degradation
    That was constructed for our loss
    Together we will do our parts
    And enjoy each other as we progress
    Our destinies light up the heavens
    Our constellation joins with success
     
  2. Khasm13

    Khasm13 STAFF STAFF

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    tis a beautiful feeling when you meet the right one...
    you captured that essense in this scribe...
    one love
    khasm
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    yes indeed the feelings is so beautiful
    flow on brother Rasheed i hear u
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    nice drop.....
    indeed...
    aint nothin like findin the right one
    flow on....
     
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    This was a beautiful love poem!

    Do yo thang this week, got me feeling kind of weak.
    For the love that I have known , shared it and now it's grown.
    Love is a many splendored thing...even 'fore yo get that ring!

    Blessings on your house! :luv: :luv: I love that romantic heart of yours!
     
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    That was strong and real man, very cool poem. Thanks for that one.
     
  7. rasheed

    rasheed Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Khasm, Thanks for your comment, all that's real is good.

    RICH, Thanks, got to build bridges......

    mzblkangel, Thanks..."Aint nothing like the real thing"

    msluciousb, Thanks, nice verse u dropped

    kente417mojo, Thanks for stopping by; glad u liked it

    Peace to Yawl :grouphug:
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    We all have our match somewhere, like the wonderful way you posed this.
     
  9. LibertyLady

    LibertyLady Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This piece here took my attention...
    and its beautifull....




    Love L
     
  10. krazelyricks

    krazelyricks Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This was so lovely.....I wish I had someone like you....much love bro
     
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