Black Poetry : Ur Taken

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by poeticlyspeakin, May 6, 2003.

  1. poeticlyspeakin

    poeticlyspeakin Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Home is where the heart is, but my heart isn't her
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    Driven by passion and rejected by games
    Called unto ur heart that someone else contains
    Ur beauty is undescribable, but is certainly a goal of mine
    dreams have turned into reality, ur no longer just an ambition of the mind

    ive waited for this day 2 come, prince charming in disguise
    take me off my feet, rescue me from this search of uncertain times
    ive met them all and concluded that ur not like other guys

    our conversations capture me and take me away, ur personality gets in me and sends me 2 a fantasy
    i walk on clouds and sing with birds, skip to the rhythm of lust and dance with the music's gravity

    U've got me, but I cant have you
    Not cuz u don't want that...
    But bcuz ur taken.
     
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    sarcasm4eva Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    truly heartfelt........those situations always sux n get worse b4 they get better...keep ur head up....much love....... :)
     
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    poeticlyspeakin Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    word up felt ya deeply
    i'm free as the wind
    touched by tyme
    within ya heart u
    can be mines
    let the mental faze
    and giude ya soul
    here is a chapter
    set to unfold

    like dis flow keep bringing sweet scribes
     
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    cattalina Active Member MEMBER

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    Wow...I could totally relate to ur piece. It was truly heartfelt thank you for sharing!
     
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