Black Poetry : Ur Dying Heart

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  1. Olatunba

    Olatunba New Member MEMBER

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    Like an ordained black
    visionary revolutionary
    born with the call to ethos terrestrail
    I will defend it,
    cherish it,
    resurrect it,
    fill it with comsic substances
    until it explodes
    like a firecracker,
    no-longer being viewed/considered/accepted
    as something void
    in a world where I exist.

    all the crevices of life
    will be locked tight
    with the heat
    of my dripping sweat,
    as a man
    I will work hard
    to keep u happy/safe
    blooming
    renewed,
    like a mighty lion
    who has marked his territory,
    and has committed his life
    to protecting it from any invaders.

    I will release
    my spirit into every chamber
    of ur withering heart,
    like roots
    of an old silk tree
    for it is my duty
    to ensure that when my heart beats,
    it beats for urs as well.

    When I breathe
    I will take a breathe for u,
    my africentricity
    will be like cool tropical waters
    spreading all over u,
    because my love
    it is my soul's greatest ecstacy
    to save ur dying heart.
     
  2. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    tyte drop !!
    welcome to destee.com poetic playground
    welcome to the new home u found
    welcome from above as i bless u some love
    welcome to the family of peace & bonding
     
  3. lilcherry76

    lilcherry76 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i liked this !, if a heart is dying, it is the partners responsibility to see that it survives, bcuz if one doesn't beat, the other dies..............tyte piece man, welcome to the house of love, where love is just the beginning...... :wave:
     
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    Beautiful_by_me Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    A sweet soul you must be...to release energy such as this... :lips:
     
  5. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    What a strong, passionate delivery of love. This was wonderfully written. Welcome to destee. Hope to read more from you.
     
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