Black Poetry : upside-down*

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  1. thepoetsean

    thepoetsean Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    how else could--
    one--
    me
    describe the
    feeling that
    just
    you
    hand me through--
    the warmth of your smile--

    and you don't even be
    smiling
    at
    me

    got me--
    down side up...
    i mean
    upside down in though--
    like when good things happen--
    for
    no
    apparent
    reason...

    got me--
    upside down--
    in thoughts of you cuz
    pain is all i usually
    ever
    eye*dentif*eye with
    but
    you
    change
    things...

    you sweep away my rain--
    with pushbrooms
    and rubber boots--
    substitute--
    for sadness--
    sort of a
    rescue too...

    you fade dreary days away--
    and make dark thoughts--
    hide under
    bright light sources--
    and yes of course it's
    because of you that--
    i...
    look forward to days after this one and
    lie awake head-full
    thinking of everything--

    got me down-side up...
    i mean...
    upside down--
    in

    thought
    of
    u.

    wurdplai.
     
  2. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    da amazement of pure love can change thangz fast
    inside ya heart is da love ready to open up rightside up!
     
  3. hi-wa

    hi-wa Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    like this joint cause u gotta
    read it slow, or you'll miss out
    on the beauty of the wurdplai.

    juanluv

    hw
     
  4. thepoetsean

    thepoetsean Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks for the read hi-wa. appreciate it.
     
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    LISTERSCRIBIN' Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    sweetie, now you know i am a big fan of yo wordplay. continue to bless me wit yo tyght pieces...i am still watchin', dear poet.
     
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    Reason Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Sean

    Im still checkin fa ya art poet! This was tyght!

    Madd Respect
    Reas
     
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