Black Poetry : Upperhand

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  1. Randee

    Randee Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    he has the upperhand
    on her body, in her mind
    on her words
    since she exploded like a pen
    raining forth emotions too intense
    to not shake as tears spilled real
    over the dusty pages of her life
    reminding her she's a woman
    and deserves this he says
    yet he then walks away
    leaving her yearning more
    begging to be touched
    to be made a woman
    this much
    he has the upperhand
     
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    cherryblossom Banned MEMBER

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    Ya big TEASE! lol

    j/k But this was definitely tempting and scintillating! :toast:

    Good one, Poet!
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    really love how you did this here .......WOW !!!
     
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    "He" has the upper hand? ...I'm sure he got two. The upper hand could never be held by man :D
    Great piece poet.