Black Poetry : UPPER ROOM .....screammin II

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  1. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Took my steps and my lumps
    but i felt this body thump
    to a beginning upper room
    a founded love's sweet cocoon
    screammin from deep inside
    as it open to my eyez suprise

    a mystery for many eyez
    a love beauty that i stare
    needed a hug of comfort & care
    screammin through this dream
    my body fien & fien to touch & kiss
    fill the heart with tenderness
    provide my loyality & trust
    make the two a we a us, to share

    Screammin upper room
    halo's dancing about
    spreading love in shouts
    my heart steel wall fall
    my soul become hot
    my love i see wasn't shot
    so i dance inside romace again
    calling her my Queen my friend
    us together is no sin

    Cover door red carpet floor
    she now my encore lover
    and the radiant glaze of tomorrow
    tappin at the base of my beings
    having my body fiennin like mango
    & tropic forest blissin in beauty
    my eyez cross through the maze
    screammin wit care so i stare
    the cocoon of love only needed
    my hug and i knew it was love

    I frown because we now so far
    and wanna clown because my heart
    i see it written, who am i kidding
    i need to take her hand
    so she understand that she my
    distance thunder that make me rumble
    let me tell her my heart from the beat
    and what it feel to be my victory treat
    o' how i'm screammin come walk wit me

    shhhhh! listen my soul pose a rose
    to keep u warm when ya cold
    my love is a rapture what many sought
    and wanna capture, I cry in yo name
    cocoon lover my spirit hold no shame
    i've weep for u so many times
    now ur here please be mines in this
    found cloudy upper room screammin
    through my touch how my body wish
    to clutch u near tell u no need to fear
    sho u tender lovin care and dress u
    in this nude of bare skin
    my lips lone to partake in kiss
    screammin of what my vision missed

    Your my desired Queen that make me
    scream and scream through this maze
    of dream to awaken still again what i feel
    is real yet thin so i send the beginning
    in tone of my hearts graceful song
    let us be a we of u and me whispering
    on my knees in silent prayer of truth
    stimulating our senses intricately , precisely
    arrayed in fashion presence of love i de vor
    purposefully dancing around me is you
    i know cocoonist lover this our upper room
    ur unknown but everlasting
    like summer & spring shimmering
    accept the offer of loyality, respect & comfort
    the kiss of cares and the mend of fears
    let my tears run like waves and embrace
    my solo heart as i of yours let the truth of
    trust be and spell our names cross the maze
    and feel the depth of my spirit callin, screammin
    as i lay my pen down and turn the page !
    next chapter new beginning i'm in love.......yes!
    :hearts4: :hearts4: :hearts4: :hearts4: :hearts4: :hearts4: :hearts4: :hearts4: :hearts4:


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    this was Levert up in here you singing loud and i know she hears
    as you pour the truth of your soul out....oh yeah i be iz feeling this vibe deep
    as a spirit sings a heart cries within two became one...upon the heavens this loves awaits.....yanno i be loving this right...right....sweet

    peace
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    now u had to say that and make me feel all mushy ova this drop
    the pen sing because it's happy and free to let the love really see
    how my heart is in care and what this soul now bare so i sing ....

    the un-core coming soon .......TYME to make that move.............
    Thank you very much Angel for the warm upspring love & support
    to a screammin heart of love .....
     
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    Now this...I could feel the warmth exuding from these words. Lovely piece poet, lovely.
     
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    wow why thank u sista watz for those warm words
    so happy u enjoyed the upper room thank u ........
     
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    This is another one of those pieces by you that I am just honored to read. The more Ir ead of you the more I learn about you and how emotional you are. I said it before and I'll say it again YOU ARE A BEAUTIFUL SOUL BROTHER RICH,BRILLIANT AND BEAUTIFUL.I look forward to getting to know you through your future scribes.
     
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    so be it and u shall .....Thank you very much sista for the warm love & words
     
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    accept my love
    as i scream ya name
    i lone by heart and
    body tame i'm in love
    claim me my beauty
    stop my screammin !
     
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    Hi brother Rich
    wow..giving you a hug dear :grouphug:
    this flow was just so lovely
    right to the depth
    can't help but connect

    Much Love
    Peace
     
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    Looks like I'm screammin 2
    just for the touch of you
    Seems like I'm screammin 4
    all the man I need and more
    Truth is I'm screammin, see
    my love is more than a possibility
    Screammin from my depths to claim
    How I want to just scream his name
     
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