Black Poetry : UPON U I ARRIVE

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  1. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    She was here when i arrived
    tenderly how she pose'd a shine
    all beautiful filled in gentle smiles
    cascading rapture of love's rhyme
    to my heart and mental mind
    her rhythm sway play's & divine

    Endearing embrace i feel a desire
    to combine souls to a burning fire
    her voice like echos beyond tele wire
    as i arrive at your bedroom to amire
    this passion of secercy we mend higher
    realizing an exprerience to beloved.

    Becoming vulnerable under her warmth
    and into her sheer beauty within she grace
    my face to be traced i cry out in confidence
    yet a lingering curiosity peer a reflection of
    moments pass and beyond reasons
    her love like an open invitation calling me.

    Overflowing i liquid my charm in protection
    as i arrived wit anticipation of compromise
    wit soft kisses tender embrace magical touch
    and comfort of love i place at your feet my
    queeneth beloveth my heart and soul as we
    journey into the unknown existence i hoover
    to proclaim at the prairie garden of cares

    Blissfully romanticly the orbs of your beings
    entrap me in excitement i confess my sins
    and sorrow for my love held no boundaries
    as i arrived improved and ready to love you
    as thy queen as my great exploring to honor
    in yo name and respect in yo heart i vow
    to not astray again beyond our space of lovin

    My emotions empressed a deep sanity
    as i absorb the grace of us into a destiny
    we once was a technicolor fantasy
    now we are bodies of great infinity
    challenge questions endlessly posed
    yet discover answers in nameless game
    together arriving at the rainbow of futility
    i loveth thee my beloveth always
    don't be afraid nor turn me back now
    forth thy heart art wit u as i exist...............

    :uhh: :callme: :flowers:

    A Dyamondluv Splassh~~~
    u~wave~Ink~Creation~~~
    2005 AllRights ® Reserved
    Da $R
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    From a fantasy of vision to a reality in the flesh, upon her you arrive in a loving bliss. All the images and meanings blended together to create such a beautiful flow, wow.
     
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    Wisdom7 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Another beautiful creation!
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    thankz watz for the visit and support

    thankz wisdom7 for the love on dis one sis
     
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    Inque Active Member MEMBER

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    Beautiful, the diction creates a rich flow and vivid imagery that does justice to the emotion behind it.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    thank you so much Inque for the visit and treating words
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    in a vison of bliss this was wonderful the soft love embrace of a truth unfoled you know i loved it....i want more of this

    I have to make room on the wall for this one!!!!


    Peace
    Angel
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    ahhhhh! yes Angel do so thankz for the warmth and lovin support
     
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    Very Nice $$RICH$$

    Like a lighthouse on the horizon after a long voyage. She was there when you arrived.
     
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    thankz brutha Hodee, awaiting me i arrived high noon upon her shelter .
     
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