Black Poetry : upon a star

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by MzBlkAngel, Feb 15, 2004.

  1. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    within my realm
    upon a star to night
    in the orbs above
    heaven and through
    the galaxy……for
    my soul burns
    and being yearns
    for the desires of you…..
    a blissful creation as
    love takes hold
    Feeling the softness of the
    comfort you give…
    embracing your essence
    feeling the love flow…
    as my mental float to
    a far off place where
    our hearts meet
    and our souls cry
    as the heavens sing…..
    angels dancing upon
    the moon light
    within the depths of no return
    rapture release time stops
    as we both are captured
    in a destiny fulfilled…..
    within our realm
    upon a star to night
    motions of passion
    linger..through the galaxy
    within the orbs….
    As a extreme love connection
    is made….
    All within a star that glows
    From the essence of us…..

    a blkangel thang...2004
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    in every star
    the glo of peace
    movin from the
    heart of love
    as it glides the
    maze of air
    caressin wit care
    the starz is da
    sparkle of hope
    flow on nice scribing sistah Queen
     
  3. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks Rich for your reply
    your support means alot
    thanks.....Peace Angel
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This flow was very sweetly expressed.
     
  5. krazelyricks

    krazelyricks Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    yo this joint was tyte..I was feelin' this....but of course I feel all your work so this is nothing new......this was just another beautiful masterpiece...keep them comin' my sister
     
  6. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks fam for da support and love....
    heyyyy foxi....
    peace
    :angel1:
     
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    Bluewater Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    oh yes
    loving this flow sis
    very very nice:)
    Peace
    BlueWater:heart:
     
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