Black Poetry : Upon A Star.....

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  1. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :star: :star: :star:
    twinkle
    twinkle
    little star…:spinstar: >:spinstar:
    place my love in da air…
    take it to him as
    loves slumber
    begin to take over……
    For I wish upon a star…
    Lets go deeper
    With thy mind…..
    His love got me
    achin
    Shakin…
    I am his honey dip
    As he kiss my lips…
    Holding my hips
    We sway in loves air…..
    In flight of delight
    upon a star…
    In da orbs of da galaxy
    Vibing and
    Thivin…
    he came in da swift
    of da night…and uncovered
    thy soul
    twinkle...:spinstar: twinkle....:spinstar:
    little star…
    from afar I came….
    Hopin and wishin
    Wonderin if it is my turn now…
    Over the moon and thru da skies…
    place my love in da air…
    take it to him as
    loves slumber
    begin to take over…… :spinstar:
    >:spinstar: >:spinstar: >:spinstar:

    blkangel thang....:angel1:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    well now
    loves slumber take ova
    twinkle of a star
    in da air ya love float
    with this gentle stroke
    let it ride da waves
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Beautiful imagery, the sky is just dancing with those stars.
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Rich..upon a star....
    a wish
    riding da waves of love...
    upon him it have laid.....

    watzinaname...the wonder of da stars dancin
    and sing..yes indeed

    thank you both for da love and replies...Angel
     
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    upon every star is a face
    a warm glo a love sparkle
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    indeed it is....
    as thy wish flows across the wind...
    thee takes it in...and a glo of thy star
    thy wish cast upon...a sweet new
    feeling...as love begins to sparkle
    thanks again Richie Rich
     
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