Black Poetry : Upon a star…..

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  1. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Upon a star last night
    I wish for you
    Upon that star last night
    A little closer to
    Paradise……
    I am....It's
    Hard to believe
    You are willing…
    Wanting and yearning
    But it's a wish
    Upon a star
    And it’s a feeling
    That came out of the blue
    Wasn’t looking for this
    But now its here….
    You walked in my life
    Made me forget of past love
    That hurt me
    Brought a smile to my heart
    Upon a star…..
    What I am feeling is so divine
    And I don’t know what to do
    Emotional I am
    My heart yearns
    And my love craves
    For what I feel inside
    Crying of joy
    Upon that star....
    I can’t seem to lace in words
    My thoughts roam
    Lost in your world
    Lost for words
    But it feels so good
    My heart took over
    And that wish…..
    Is coming true
    Out of the blue
    Feeling just like paradise
    Upon a star
    I wish....
    You walk in
    And my world is changing
    Said love was not for me
    But now….
    I think it is knocking on my door
    Nothing has meaning no more
    All day on my mind
    All up in my dreams
    Upon a star I wish
    Last night
    And the night before
    And before that
    I wish upon a star
    For a man just like you
    Now I don’t know
    Where to go from here
    Holding back tears
    Do I dare step in this
    For my heart is doing its on thing
    For my wish is coming true…
    The only question I have…….
    Can we just take our time?

    Upon a star last night
    I wish for you
    ...............and you walked in

    (C) 2004
    Poetry by an Angel
     
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    beautiful how u wish and from that star a sparkle shine in ya face
    well done sista
     
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    MzMelanie2u2 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This is such a beautiful piece.
    and it has an incredible sweet flow.
    I wonder if the stars are out t'night..lol
    "KEEP EM COMIN" poet...1

    :welldone:
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank you both for the love and support

    Peace
    Angel
     
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    indeed very touching piece ......Most welcome
     
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    thank you again...just happy u enjoyed as u did.....:kiss:
     
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