Black Poetry : up up and away, it's SUPERPOET

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  1. tzevi1278

    tzevi1278 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    LOOK IN THE SKY!
    It’s a bird,
    it’s a plane,
    no, it’s a poetic brotha with a flow that’s insane,
    but don’t get it twisted,
    me and that other super dude ain’t the same.
    Cause I don’t rock the spandex or the “S” on my chest,
    just a baggy pair of jeans and “RPS” engraved in my flesh.
    Unable to leap tall building in a single bound,
    but I leave minds leaning with a single noun.
    Profound meanings can be found at the speed of sound,
    cause once heard, they surround and besiege your crown.
    Certainly not more powerful than a locomotive,
    but my train of thought will lead you to the “local motive”,
    the revolutionary total of the words I show you.
    And no I’m not equipped with the laser vision,
    but been know to burn a lip from the blaze I’m penning,
    and if you read it to yourself, it’s an amazing feeling.
    So you can keep your x-ray vision and your ice cold breath,
    and I’mma keep inkin’ truth in this nice bold text.
    Cause honestly superman is just a thing of the pass,
    and if he tries to test your boy,
    I’ll drop this scriptonite on his ***.
    And I don’t need mask or a secret identity,
    cause my flow is etched in stone on the bank of your memory.
    So next time you see a sick punchline
    or ill verse and you don’t know it,
    nine times out of ten,
    it’s probably from the SUPERPOET.

    I was bored and decided to write some foolishness, don’t mind me “I got issues”



    Copyright 2005
    © Ramarla D. Rozier
    Kiastar inc. Krate Creations publishing
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Loved the rhyme, rhythm and word play. This was a fun read poet.
     
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    peace,

    enjoyable flow Superpoet, keep flowin' like this and your magnetic stlye will be the scriptonite that will remove any issues u may have.........

    peace bra!
     
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    the sweet effects laid out to canvas tyte write
     
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    ...you might have issues

    but there's no denying it

    You also have skillZ...(the kind with the "z" at the end...not the "s")

    Loving it!
     
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    Think you got "Issues"? ...well I got issues too
    but since your's came first, tell ya what I'm gonna do...

    Let you spill ...from the top of your "dome"
    and after that, I'm gon bring it on home

    Look up in the sky, ...not for a bird or a plane
    peep through the dark clouds, and search for my name

    I'm the sun and the moon, the rain and the snow...
    I'm the thunder that storms you, no matter where you go

    I'm winter, spring ...summer and fall
    you'll freeze on sight, when my name is called

    but ... uh...

    Don' mind me ..."I got issues"​

    This was an enjoyable read poet, thanks for allowing me to join in on the fun. And I might add, your pen makes awesome love to your paper.
     
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    geegee Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    lol....very nice flow there brotha...i'm diggin that poem!
     
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    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Big UP, UP, and away ~ SUPER friend.
     
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    Prizefighter16 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this was really entertainin to read. wow, scriptonite, lol, that's wat i call writing. I see your not afraid to let us know bout the power of your pen. I see you, great poem.

    keep the flow goin
    SCW
     
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    moham Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hey superpoet, this was fresh 'n funny.
    it's not a bird, it's a bunny.
    and don't mind the issues. You got issues, I got issues, we got issues, they got issues.... :insane:

    just do ya thing :spinn:
    moham
     
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