Black Poetry : Up to Bat

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  1. rhymebad

    rhymebad Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Up to Bat

    Look I’m like a Dwight Gooden thug holding a wooden club
    At bat two on base a true strong race to score must try slug
    The baseball and erase all doubts about this win let scores hug
    The score board, not here to strike out but to strike the ball like
    Serena William in an arena pavilion unseated she had tall hype
    To win the Australia Open love you girl her body is built nice
    She wore a jacket and carried a racket, back to the baseball sacrifice
    One must be very quick with a heavy stick to hit a legit homerun
    Without steroids trot around bases see hot renown faces foam run
    Down coke cans as hopes, plans and dreams of the opposing team
    Fade like clothes in bleach the foes reached their limit and now scream
    Lots of thug clout is spoken in the dug out, look the game starting to sway
    Like hardened clay tough to get a win up to bat swing and boom
    A homerun son
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    diggin dis drip at da bat
    outta here homerun it's doneeeeeeee!!
     
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    ALL RIGHT RICH THANKS FOR THE INPUT
     
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    He swings, it connects, that ball is outta here. Tight write rhyme.
     
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    watzinaname thanks for the props for real