Black Poetry : unwritten

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by eternalprince, Oct 31, 2003.

  1. eternalprince

    eternalprince Active Member MEMBER

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    These words do not exist.
    Like the heartache I had to supress
    When you decided to end our relationship,
    These words do not exist.
    In there place residesd a desire to generate
    Wormholes during solar flares to traverse time
    That I may eradicate
    This travesty created by my pen.
    It's ink inscribed upon existence
    Testament to my love and your beauty,
    Even as the only good thing you could say about me
    Was the freindly desire for my contentment.
    How could I be so wrong?
    How dare I try to love you?
    How could I so callausly use your heart
    Then cast IT aside?
    I couldn't.
    You left me.
    You decided I wasn't giving enough.
    You took my heart and my words and told me they weren't good enough.
    You stole my poetry,
    And turned it aggainst me.
    Your right though, this is my fault.
    I should have been a big boy
    And given you what you needed and not what you wanted,
    Instead I gave in to my desires and this is the result.
    Lesson learned.
    And I am Undone.
     
  2. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    wow..tight flow...wow
     
  3. nadea

    nadea Active Member MEMBER

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    nice piece

    :crying: :crying: :crying:
    :crying: :crying: :crying:
    :crying: :crying: :crying:
     
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    nadea Active Member MEMBER

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    I left you

    If only it were that simple
    How COULD you TRY to love me.
    You could try by telling me the truth.
    You spoke words that weren't dripping
    with emotion of someone trying to love.
    Eternal Love was satiating each and
    every syllable of the things you spoke.
    Yet your actions were...



    Eternal Prince, you inspire me.

    Thank You.
     
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    SwtT Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    wow..thi was deeply moving
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    dis was very nice scribing here ...tyte continue
     
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    ahhhh wow
    the flow is vibing
    nice scribe
    this is deep
    Peace
     
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    Royal_T Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    nice skrybe...heartache is something else.
     
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    an intricate weave of emotion
    relentless flow of deep waters
    posing questions of promises...
    forever
    she and he
    and I am undone...by reading such

    for a moment I breathed your words...

    Encore:spinstar:
     
  10. eternalprince

    eternalprince Active Member MEMBER

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    thank you all for the love in the pain
     
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