Quiet Poetry Lounge : unveil stain

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by $$RICH$$, Oct 20, 2004.

  1. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Walked cross
    danger path
    i will not die
    going under
    with my head
    up high

    no one feel
    the heat but
    only my heart
    beat on scares
    and wounded
    blood

    stain the earth
    on salty tears
    leaving a shadow
    to fear death

    days numbered !
    in times of tics
    the toc don't stop
    the looms of pain
    remain closer
    :time:
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    oh i can feel this
    wow deep thoughts
    just feelin da flow
    vibing on da meaning
    tight scribe
    peace
    angel
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Traveling on despite the pain it seems...Pain can seem like a shadow sometimes, it's strong true, but you're stronger.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    thankz angel sometime the clock will stop and it come a end .


    thankz watz also sometime the end is deadly and u fine self not as strong.
     
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    I truly feel you, brotha $$RICH$$. This is beautifully laid. I am sendin you much love and keepin you in my thoughts and prayers. :hearts2:
     
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    phenomenalwoman Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    wow, moving flow. just know you do not walk the path alone
     
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    ...moving
    and powerfully
    conveyed
    ...sometimes
    strength will arise
    even when we think
    there is none left
    to overcome the pain

    Nice flow
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    thankz family .................
    gempis much luv & hugs fo real

    phenomenal sho nuff right i feel the lift coming

    Sage u said it sista and i know the power is greater then defeat
    thank u all for the love & support and warm words that lift me up higher
     
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    queentswana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Pain is pain ...and by any other name, ..it's still pain, but it's how we reveal and wear it ....that tells the story. The fact that it's your story you're telling ..means, you're the winner "over all"
    I rode :horse: with you on this piece. Thanks for sharing it.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    thank u for listening and the pain as it heals
    sista queen
     
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