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  1. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    My heart standing cautiously
    intensely as da moonlight glist
    blanket a brilliant shadow
    my spirit floats aloaf carries
    strength, it's pride and wisdom
    upon the graceful skies
    my eyes show an termination
    to the masterpiece .

    As thy hands paint life brightness
    in multi colors of control
    master of hue
    ink drops to canvas as sunset
    darkness looms with excitement
    adding magical rhythm of stance
    rolling in uninhibited mass
    framing the aspens .

    The journey becomes a struggle
    yet enlightenment to da edge
    every corner mastered neatly
    my love now recognizable
    like an universal warmth catching
    an glimpse of da horizon soul erupting.


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    This read like the evening sky was dripping it's peaceful essence onto paper. Such a pretty picture...
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Thank u sista watz
     
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    love how you put it down in this one love.:smooch: :smooch::welldone:
     
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    Thank u very much sista Nevar happy u like .
     
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    a stunning, open piece, RICH...had me hooked from the first line...love the rhythm and the visuals...great write
     
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    Thankz a million for the love and visit abstract219
     
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