Black Poetry : UNTOUCHABLE

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  1. sheikdadon

    sheikdadon Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    After a week apart, 2 different states my mind is plagued
    she says its been a week and when she arrived I was asleep
    I say I got no warning call, she said I was suppose 2 wait up
    I came 2 greet her and show her how much I missed her
    congratulate and shower her with infinite kisses.
    but I got no chance cuz she was so cold.. wishing!?
    wishing she didnt say those things 2 me.
    Its become impossible 2 satisfy her. Untouchable
    I was home waiting, copped her half carat earrings
    not tryna buy the love of my wife, just heartfelt things
    but its not enuff, couldve been with friends in the streets
    now Im forced 2 sleep alone when shes here after a lonesome week
    Im hurt so bad, groomed the dogs, was a good wife
    hurts when she says she should be single. that means a divorce
    Im not that bad of a lover. She didnt give me a chance
    Im thoughtful and loving but how can you greet a snarling beast?!
    2 me even if she was upset,I tried 2 fix it... I still got no love
    its been a week and still we havent touched
    after 3 years of being yelled at Im begining 2 feel untouchable
    Im hurt deep with rampant emotions. Unbelievable.
    her lack of patience and understanding at times..
    its making me feel distant and far removed from her..
    U N T O U C H A B L E
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    indeed and this was a great read
     
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    baller Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    it's amazing...

    how we chase the ones we love away...with our behaviors, and attitudes, and cold shoulders, and all our negativity. then, we wonder what went wrong...what happened.

    nice.
     
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