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Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by $$RICH$$, May 22, 2008.

  1. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Blown by the head
    voice not wed
    as the tongue speak
    words unworthy leak
    over turned by self
    left unfinished blind wealth
    Untouchable knowledge
    in fear of the wise
    while in the face bid by lies
    trouble proclaim da name
    weaker in self shame
    truth never tame
    yet pointing to another for blame
    untouchable kind
    lost over stone mind
    as life abids .:whip:
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Reading this, brings to mind that saying about there's her story, his story, and then there's the truth. Neither wants to face exactly what is. To thine own self be true. Am I on the right track, Rich?
     
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    Sha'iyn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    real spit

    this sounds like one of those unsure relationships. we gotta learn to work through all the confusion and pick a mate and make the best out of it all, good flow, brethren
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    yes sister watz , it's like two that have divided from self untruth and the tale of lies
    now the only way is to work together to learn the realism of self and the truth.

    yes sha'iyn one now have to pick up the pieces together and work it out
     
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    Hi RICH
    There is so much thats not touched upon.
    And sometimes fear makes one not want to
    travel to seek more, whether it is knowlegde
    or understanding. Yet if we don't
    then words will come out of your mouth
    that that is unworthy.
    We have to think before we speak, and
    before we speak we should have some understanding
    about what we want to say.
    That's just my thought.
    Nice flow


    Peace~N~Love
     
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    PLATINUMILLITY1 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    It wild How we Walk this Earth Blind, Selfish, and Ignorant of the imporance we hold with our Lives....Remaining Strong In the Flesh....Yet So weak in our Hearts and Minds
    Untouchable...
    But, only to some

    Flow On Big Bro
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    sho ya right bluewater thankz for the visit sis

    Yes Plat weakness has been the circle of many down fall thankz sis
     
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    Da Street So'ja Banned MEMBER

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    never finding whats true

    and true to thyself is even greater

    great depth here

    CHI-town brethren
     
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    word brother so'ja
     
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