Black Poetry : UNTOUCHABLE

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  1. Sweet baby_face

    Sweet baby_face Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hey everybody.....
    this is something off the top...
    ...hope u feel me on this..

    I see the way u look at me
    and u like what u see
    thinking of all the dreams
    of u completely having me
    i know u wish and dream
    of me being yr boo
    despite the fact that we kinda talk
    i really just don't want u
    can't believe i put through this
    and all that bulls**t
    cause u couldn't touch my skin
    even if u were my dermatologist
    so baby boy don't trip
    u were never gonna get me
    just be happy that i let u keep me company
    so leave me alone
    don't try yr luck
    cause i am something that u won't touch
    crush
    beat it up
    or whatever u may say
    just know that i won't go yr way
    now u can cease with the thoughts
    of something between us will happen
    just the thought of u makes my stomach start gagging
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Sometimes a person can just turn us off, because it's just not like that, and most likely, will never be. I hear what you're saying poet.
     
  3. BlatinaPoet4u

    BlatinaPoet4u Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    OMG!!!! THAT WAS OFF DA CHAINS SISTAH!!!!! I absolutely loved itm please drop another one soon...i love ur writing and im a BIG FAN OF URS!!!!:hearts1: :great:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    felt every core of this piece....
     
  5. Sweet baby_face

    Sweet baby_face Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :hearts1: :hearts1:
    Thank u all!!!
    Very appreciated.
    :peace: :peace:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    most welcome sista Queen
     
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    now that truly a diss to a guy you really didnt want to be with. i feel ya on this.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    upping it back .....i like
     
  9. Sweet baby_face

    Sweet baby_face Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank u $$RICH$$

    Thank u watz

    Thank u Blatina

    And Thank u nevar

    I know it ain't nice, but
    that's how it goes sometimes,right?
     
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    Hi Sweet baby face
    very cool poem
    I could just picture these
    verus being express
    with hands on hips ...lol

    just be happy that i let u keep me company
    so leave me alone
    don't try yr luck
    cause i am something that u won't touch
    crush

    Keeping the poetry coming

    Peace
     
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