Black Poetry : untold feelings

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by MsDLite, Jan 29, 2001.

  1. MsDLite

    MsDLite Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    (note: this is part of a short story)
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    he picked up his pen
    and pad
    ready to release feelings
    bottled inside
    his soul...

    it was time...

    he felt "something"
    for her...unidentifiable
    at first...foreign at most
    was it love?
    a strong "liking"...or
    infatuation?
    he assumed the first...
    love

    he was wrong...very wrong

    he lived each day
    for the love of this woman
    he wanted merely as
    a friend
    ...a woman he could
    confide in
    disclose that which dwelled
    deep within
    she held the key to his
    source...

    yet...

    she was not his soul mate
    she was not his undying love
    she was not his wife to be

    but...

    he loved her
    truly
    deeply...
    cared for her
    she return those feelings
    ...and much more

    with pen and pad
    in hand
    he began to dismiss
    her from his
    life...

    MsDLite (c) 01.01
     
  2. Destee

    Destee destee.com STAFF

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    Flow Beautiful MsDLite
    thank you for sharing with us!!!

    :)

    your presence here means soooooo much !!!

    Thank You !!!
     
  3. Juicylv4u2

    Juicylv4u2 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    very touching Sis...I felt the flow :)

    1Love,
    Juice
     
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    baller Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    waiting for the book...

    wanting to hear more 'bout love gone awry...hmmm.
    always nice to read the Dliteful one:)
     
  5. MsDLite

    MsDLite Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Short Story

    I hope to have this (very) short story complete
    by this weekend or next. I will post it on my
    poetry site...

    ...thanks for the love and support...
     
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    THE WHOLE STORY

    YOU is the bomb- 1poetsought
     
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