Black Poetry : UNTOLD DESTINY FULFILLED (a PositiveMindset & mzblkangel collaboration)

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  1. PositiveMindset

    PositiveMindset Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    PositiveMindset

    U are my destiny.
    My meant 2 be.
    Physically & mentally.
    The one who'll transform
    U & I into we.
    My angel soaring gracefully.
    The mental net pulls
    U straight 2 me.
    And me 2 U.
    So we meet at the midpoint.
    I'll use kisses 2 anoint.
    Til time infinite.
    I wanna bless U with my gift.
    Make U feel bliss
    from the inside out.
    I'll tell U I love U
    without using my mouth
    Actions speak louder than words,
    And my actions shout.
    Don't wanna talk 2 your ears,
    I wanna converse with your heart.
    Dilated pupils give me my cue 2 start.
    Then the breathing gets rapid.
    The sound's stimulatingly attractive.
    Let's make lovely music.
    Together we'll create a sexy duet.
    Whatever U wanna do, I'm cool with.
    Just say the word.

    mzblkangel

    Angel
    Destiny of a dream
    Ignites upon you
    As you take my hand...
    We transform into one...
    Wingz yet to unfold
    As I hold my fears
    Of you and I...
    My mental plays with
    Me but pulls me close
    to your folds
    Your kiss awakes me
    My body begins to yearn...
    My heart races...for past
    actions flashes
    Within I search my
    soul on high I feel...
    The music lights the fire
    As we dance in the
    star radiance
    A tear falls...
    for tonight have
    no regrets..
    the moon beam
    takes us close
    and bonds
    the secrets of
    you and I
     
  2. Bluewater

    Bluewater Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this is just beautiful in all it's poetic flair
    lovely
    wonderful
    nice one
    Peace
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    simply sweet this was awesome
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This was very sweet and gentle. Very nice collab on this.
     
  5. krazelyricks

    krazelyricks Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Awwwww........this was so so so beautiful.........I loved this drop.....
     
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    Bluewater thank you very much...glad ya enjoyed the write..much love:angel1:

    Olakuoto...we both thank you for da love...

    $$RICH$$..thank you so happy ya like it..means alot..thank you:angel1:

    watzinaname..ahh thank you

    foxylady30315 baby girl thank you means alot..love ya...:angel1:


    Mr.PositiveMindset it was very nice workin with you..i really enjoyed it..much love..:angel1:
     
  7. PositiveMindset

    PositiveMindset Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Fam, mzblk has said exactly what is in my heart, thank U all 4 reading & feeling.

    mzblk, thank U for the opportunity. The pleasure & honor are definitely & unquestioningly mine.
     
  8. UniverSouL

    UniverSouL Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Beautiful connection and concoction Poets.

    Beautiful way to represent love. This kind of energy is needed and felt.

    Thank you.

    Peace and Poetry,
    UniverSouL

     
  9. angelicsage

    angelicsage Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Positive......"King"...you know...you already know :bowdown:
    your fan club founder is on the page... :wink:


    Guys this was tyte!
     
  10. PositiveMindset

    PositiveMindset Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank U so very much.
     
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