Black Poetry : unto u my loveth

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  1. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    warm whispers
    gentle embrace
    sweet love
    on ya tender face

    unto u my loveth
    i so embrace
    in da arms of warmth
    as our journey
    is so far
    we sit in the stello
    and watch from
    the afar regions of
    misty love
    the orbs of our souls
    cross the galaxy of
    reasons to this land

    unto u my loveth
    i stand beside u
    here & now
    seeking ya love of
    emotion
    asking for ya grace

    allow me to hold u
    in foreverness
    ur the one i sought
    and whom i so loveth
    my inner emotions
    runs wild when ya near

    can we continue
    i love u
    more today and
    even more tomorrow
    uset my heart to sail
    afloat in the bay of love
    where hope is no mystery
    but togetherness found
    i pose my vow
    and thou heart unto u
    my LOVETH :heart: :heart: :heart:
     
  2. bahati

    bahati Active Member MEMBER

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    oh wow that touches my heart so deeply. it's wonderful
     
  3. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    thank u .........forth the love has touched
    now ya time to take flyte in the embrace
    of warmth and ride on great pride of loveth
     
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    HODEE Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Nice Flow $$RICH$$.

    Feeling this. Only grace a woman can give.
     
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    PlayWitItPimp05 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Can't you just feel the warmth??? :blush:

    :heart: :heart: PLAY :heart: :heart:
     
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    Sierra Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hey Rich,

    This is a beautiful piece!! I love it!! I do feel the emotion of it. Very nice read!!

    ~Sierra~:heart:
     
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    Hey RICH this is so warm..i am feeling this..very nice...
    Peace
     
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    krazelyricks Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Yo $$RICH$$ this flow is madd tyte. It touched my heart. I don't know what else to say.
     
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    This is so refreshingly sweet are your words and thoughts on the perfect love!
     
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    Rich, this is soo sweet :toast:
     
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