Black Poetry : Unto She

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  1. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    At last again
    her beauty
    face me
    yet i know her name

    mesmerized by her
    i feel the need of words
    i try yet unspoken
    i walk slowly
    brushing by her
    capturing her inside my
    everylasting mental
    I know what she feel like
    i've seend her face

    yet not her name i knoweth of
    i whisper wit breeze to ear
    may i
    if u don't mine
    what is your NAME !?????:)

    U can end my daydream
    comfort my notions of vision
    what is your name
    i wanna know u
    hold u
    and protect u
    sho u affection
    be in yo direction
    respect u i can do
    love through n' through
    comfort u with caresses
    share mental thoughts
    hold ya hand
    go for walks
    what is your name !?

    I've called u time and time before
    butta luv.:heart:
     
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    lilcherry76 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    you wait for her,
    you want to know her name.
    but to love her,
    should be your aim.
    learn to give,
    more than you please.
    only then,
    will they long for your needs.............(tight...keep it comin')
     
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    amberly Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this is very lovely, Rich
     
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    Dream Weaver Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    $$RICH$$,
    You still lookin for her? did u read her that prose like I told ya?? in the meantime buena suerte.


    I'm just sayin...
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    lilcherry...i seek her heart
    from da start
    i knoweth of her
    butta luv
    I aim to caress
    I masterfully respect
    I will know her name
    and she i will claim

    Amberly ..........Thankz i been in a maze of her beauty through a
    vision of her spoken voice
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    DreamWeaver .................i have set sight on her
    and my heart lone 4 her beauty untouched
    i knoweth of her now i've faced her and spoken
    yet i wish for her name .......I call her butta luv.

    Cindy Cindy Cindy!!
    Da Chick is my heart
    still my thrill that i feel
    yet i wanna know who butta luv be
    she dance cross da ballroom floor
    like a cloud of joy

    y'all know one day she will speak out her name
     
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    midnightsson Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i like this piece rich, the search seems to never end...nice vibe
     
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    shaz Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    digin that vibe poet
    nice read
     
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    midnightsson...........yes i continue my journey i will someday
    make contact unto her foreverness

    Shaz ..............Thankz it ain't ova !
     
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    my name is...

    nice flow. i feel u on this one. so many times "mr. seem so right" juss keeps passin me by b4 i can even get his name and when i do get his name that's all i get along with an unexpected goodbye. but i juss proceed on my journey juss like you searching for his "foreveness"

    ;)
     
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