Black Poetry : untitled...?

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  1. blakverb

    blakverb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    many odes written for you
    many verses rehearsed
    to get next to you
    some you pay no mind to
    cause time cost and yours is
    priceless so why waste it.?

    sometimes / no all the time I just want to
    feel you without life's bullshyt
    beating me down
    cause that **** downgrades the libido
    I want to feel you so deeply
    that your synapse smacks me across the *** on the
    way by
    with no reason why
    except to help me understand what it feels like
    to be a satisfied you

    I want to love you until I need mental help
    that "doctor I can't sleep without her"
    "my body aches without her"
    "I need medicine to ease the pain of absence"
    kinda help

    cause **** your running through my circulatory system
    adding rhythms to my heartbeat
    as you climb from left to right side
    ventricle to ventricle

    yo really this **** has gotten straight medical
    you make my blood pressure ride high

    and when I cry / like real men do on occasion/
    I want to have your shoulders to let the tears
    run down the middle of your back to the places
    I like to venture and spend time at

    like it's a 9 2 5

    but loving you aint work
    it's like grown folk recess
    when **** gets too hard
    it's my place to go
    to escape into the excitement
    of who you are.

    (c)2002 blakverb " a quik thought"
     
  2. Aaliyahmonet

    Aaliyahmonet Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I'm feelin ya on dis piece blak! U continue 2 flow yo pieces and may u find dat special someone in yo life 2 make u happy. If dat person isn't treatin u right, kick his ***!.:)

    Aaliyahmonet
     
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    OmoObatala Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Try this on for size as a title:

    "Prescription" or

    "Formula"

    that **** is off the chain
     
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    garrison.


    mmm mmm mmm! imma have to agree with exodus...
    "this **** IS off the chain"!! & you know what? lovin'
    you ain't work either, BLakMan. as a matter of fact...
    it's all very good!! write on... write on....

    itsallLove, chile.

    elayne.
     
  5. N2urSoul

    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Umh.... excuse me, .... Mr. Prolific ....

    I got a kick outta this

    "Grown Folks' Recess"
    Acronymically speaking "GFR" can be very rewarding!!! :lol:
    Your work/words are off da charts....

    This is all U bruh!!

    N2
     
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    quick thought my ***...

    brutha blak...this rang pure as the driven snow from the mountains of northern...........

    anyway, beautifully put, Blak. THANKS for laying it.
     
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