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  1. LURK

    LURK Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I am a millions miles away from the smiles
    and the beauty of this world....
    Sooo much ugliness in the city,
    yet for the time being i'm a hold this down for a while...
    You see, how can one be content with his surroundings,
    if he is not content with himself???
    trust me, its like you'll just end up drowning,
    while still searchin' for your 'self'..

    Give me a piece of your heart,
    and I'll give you a piece of mind...
    not mine, though, you see
    i kinda got a feelin' you were blind....
    Blind to see whats goin on....

    we are showin wrong to these kids....
    yet we're growin strong...
    STRONGER than what we were.
    we felt tooooooo safe,put it at that...
    Now whut??Mr. President you want me to
    all of a sudden tip over my hat???
    HELL NO--- said the devils advocate
    funny to come from him...
    I feel an array of depression rushin' in.....

    People can deceive
    do you believe the bull we're fed????
    another terrorist attack?????highley unlikely,
    since we heard what this one and that one said....

    yeah i am a lil peeved
    but also i am berieved at the fact...
    that soo many saw it comin'-
    and yet soo many fell into the trap....

    if i can come in anywhere
    it'll be right there when you're on the ground..
    My hand too grasp tightly--
    to pull you up -n- about

    but please, do not take me lightly,
    for who knows whut 2morrow will bring....
    its like one minute we're togetha,
    but the next minute could be a different thing...

    its how it seems......


    lurk onez tm2002 9-12-02 4:57pm
     
  2. LURK

    LURK Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i'm a just flow peoples....comment if ya want....
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    u only playing out da reality of dis world today
    we fine self here and the next somewhere else
    wit nothing to hold on ......flow head on !
     
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    i see this piece as
    "how my mind wrapped around it:
    mindflows in circular motions..."
    i love this flow of your mind thoughts.
    -7:spinstar:
     
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    LURK Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    NO DOUBT YALL....JUST MY THOUGHTS....
    THANX FO' YO FEED BACK
     
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    :wave: Haaaaaaaaaaaay LURK :wave:

    Welcome ~ Welcome ~ Welcome

    Thank you for joining us ... sharing your spirit and flow

    so very nice

    Please make yourself at home

    :heart:

    Destee
     
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    LURK Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    WELL THANK U FOR WELCOMING ME....
    I APPRECIATE DA LOVE DESTEE....AND I GOT ALOT TA SHARE!!...ONE LOVE
     
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    Da Street So'ja Banned MEMBER

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    yo and you couldn' t give this deep as piece as title man
    this sh*t is phat dun, yo i was really the mental flava here
    and the message but do many?


    DSS
     
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