Black Poetry : Untitled

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Caesarlee31, Sep 4, 2002.

  1. Caesarlee31

    Caesarlee31 Active Member MEMBER

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    I
    wanted to give to you roses
    with long stems and no thorns
    but I seemed to confusse things
    and i gave you reasons 2 fall deeply
    4 - 1/2 assed sentiment
    seemlessly streaming from
    lips you never kissed.
    unlike those roses I once recieved from you
    - white I think
    but they have long since faded
    and our attraction is
    now lacking the closeness it once had
    but I was a sweet song
    a bitter sweet ghetto love song
    about roses and moonlight and romance
    then i gave again reasons 2 have children
    to grow up with no father
    I'll stick to giving roses
     
  2. Reason

    Reason Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Ceaser

    Im feelin this!!!

    Reas
     
  3. wildflower7

    wildflower7 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    yes...
    because roses don't feel pain
    like fatherless children
    do...
    this was hot...
    -7:spinstar:
     
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    alyce Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    feasting on the soulful flows of my Beautiful Brothaz today... I am enjoying the meal.

    Thank you so much for this morsel from your heart...

    alyce
     
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    redlady Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This was deep...it should be a **** Hallmark card.
     
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