Black Poetry : untitled #?

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  1. blakverb

    blakverb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    mouth watering
    seeing visions of
    aching bodies
    laying among the
    tragedies of a day
    waiting to be relieved
    bodies cleansed
    sweat out the impurities
    of emotional fallacies
    that fall from the tongue
    of lingering memories
    ///so we love///

    ///and collide our bodies
    upon the banks of our spirits
    and energies and spend
    our energy on each other
    to assassinate the fallacies
    the painful memories
    ///

    cause "love lied" pain
    hurts too much

    mouth watering
    waiting for you to fall within
    the boundaries of my visions
    so I can anoint the many inches
    of you with a new song
    of appreciation.

    (c02002 blakverb
     
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    UbZoRbShUn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    verb

    "love lied" hmmmmm






    One
     
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    blakverb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Queens,

    thanks for the replies. ya'll know I have much love for ya
     
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    GA_Sunshyne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    sgp.


    ...how i almost missed this one?!?!!

    you need to give this brain chile a name!... soon!
    i especially loved the part below!... it's a "10". :D


    itsallLove, chile.

    elayne.
     
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