Black Poetry : Untitled

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  1. YingYang11

    YingYang11 Active Member MEMBER

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    I already posted some of my poems on a website called hellopoetry. So I'm just gonna post those that I really like.

    Untitled:
    Death is like
    Origami paper
    which spills from a old woman's face
    INTENSELY
    until all her
    melatonin
    skin
    dissaPears
    and all that is left
    is an empty Volume of space
    oncefullofthethingsthat
    made her
    UnIqUe​
     
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    TotalView Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Brother Poet YingYang11,

    I love the concept behind this piece. Very creative.

    (smile)