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  1. nadea

    nadea Active Member MEMBER

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    Placing physical rings around fingers
    before walking down aisles and finding that
    when you get to the end, you are not the
    same person anymore.

    Name changes to show ownership, like...
    collars and leashes around a dogs neck

    lifting veils but not yet breaking the chains
    that came with the engagement ring

    jumping over brooms knowing that you will
    never be the same person anymore
    you will never be the same person anymore
    you......I, will never be the same person anymore

    Baby........I can't marry you
     
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    Hypnotize Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    " Here comes the Bride, all dressed in ... "


    * music stops *


    " nevermind, she left. "
     
  3. nadea

    nadea Active Member MEMBER

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    silly silly silly

    Hypno,

    I hope you don't have dreams about this stuff.

    Thanks for readin my ish
     
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    cocobutterskyn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I dig the way laid this.
    It protrays a small piece
    of a large portrait.


    Scribeaboutit!
    CCBSKYN :heart:
     
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    nadea Active Member MEMBER

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    thanks Coco
     
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    but baby you know we were meant to be together, how could you do this to me.

    no I love it "sweety" keep it comming
     
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