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  1. MahoganyUnique

    MahoganyUnique Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I feel my life has been a train wreck
    They say once a good girl's gone bad she will never come back
    I disagree which leaves me hope for what's next
    Gotta get my mind right so that I can collect
    Cuz right now I'm feeling like I'm not at my best
    Bad choices flood my home, water receeding, and its still a mess
    Just feels wrong living in all this distress
    Past decisions dominating me trying to take what's left of me
    My inner beauty I can't see cause my inner thoughts taking the best from me
    Seems like the devil sitting next to me, with a long **** and a killer smile inside out its killing me
    Thinking I need some sexual healing cause its been awhile and he pursuing me
    Coerced again by this fullfilment that is toxic, makes me sick
    Dying inside and my only release right now is this bic
    I got a notion just to write to save my soul
    Praying these words and the reason take a toll Fighting myself to long and this **** getting old
    No more will I sit here and self loathe
    They say once a good girls gone bad shell never come back
    I disagree which gives me hope for what's next
    Got my mind right now I can collect
    My blessings
    Cause right now I feel I learned my lesson
     
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    It would seem that you have learned the most valuable lesson there is to learn. To Love and respect oneself. Because of your courage my spirit is uplifted. Thanks.
     
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    Greetings,

    And thank you. I agree with you it is very valuable and has been my strength thus far.
     
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    Live and Learn.Seen Good girls gone bad and seen bad girl gone good.As long as everyone is will to change,to learn there is hope.Great Piece of truth and honesty.
     
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