Black Poetry : untitled

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Desert Storm, Feb 13, 2012.

  1. Desert Storm

    Desert Storm Well-Known Member MEMBER

    Country:
    United States
    Joined:
    Mar 31, 2001
    Messages:
    1,662
    Likes Received:
    29
    Ratings:
    +31
    one day
    over the stars and the moon
    climbing up
    stepping down
    touching the ground
    in and out
    circle round
    touch down
    dont make a sound
    wild out of my mind
    imaginations wondering
    all the time
    slipping
    slipping
    i fall
    in a tunnel of
    abyss
    a heart of lull
    in and out
    you found me out.
    i'm open for you
    exposing me
    inside
    you want that
    even that
    part of me
     
  2. baller

    baller Well-Known Member MEMBER

    Country:
    Canada
    Joined:
    Jan 28, 2001
    Messages:
    3,759
    Likes Received:
    673
    Gender:
    Male
    Location:
    the near north
    Ratings:
    +836
    thought provoking.

    from the physical to the metaphorical, completely exposing self for acceptance.

    the river floweth.
     
  3. TotalView

    TotalView Well-Known Member MEMBER

    Country:
    United States
    Joined:
    Oct 7, 2003
    Messages:
    1,293
    Likes Received:
    676
    Gender:
    Female
    Location:
    North Carolina via NY
    Ratings:
    +698

    Dear Sister Poet Desert Storm,

    This piece is pure gold. It is extremely sensual and incredibly sexy. Truly enjoyed the read. Thanks for sharing.

    (smile)
     
  4. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

    Country:
    United States
    Joined:
    Mar 21, 2001
    Messages:
    69,983
    Likes Received:
    3,978
    Gender:
    Male
    Occupation:
    BUSINESS owner
    Location:
    Da~WINDY*CITY //CHICAGO
    Ratings:
    +4,178
    love the mix of this well felt piece
     
Loading...
Similar Threads - untitled
  1. Desert Storm
    Replies:
    2
    Views:
    372
  2. $$RICH$$
    Replies:
    2
    Views:
    430
  3. YingYang11
    Replies:
    1
    Views:
    413
  4. asimplepoet
    Replies:
    4
    Views:
    451
  5. Desert Storm
    Replies:
    3
    Views:
    553