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Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by alyce, Feb 7, 2012.

  1. alyce

    alyce Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i am not the authority
    on someone else's love affair

    i'm not trying to be privy
    to what others may share

    or how they sweetly move together
    on moonlit nights

    ... how they send each other
    into orbit
    after heated fights

    i don't presume to know
    what they do or how or why

    i don't pretend to know
    of the origins of their collective "sigh"

    for

    the organism of every cell of love
    is wonderfully unique

    it's the final destination
    for the ones who truly seek

    i'd never be the one
    to say who's love
    is more or less fine

    my vision of love is
    all i know

    and
    he is completely
    mine
     
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    so wonderful when true love manifests itself through the written word. beautifully done. too many people try to define their relationship--their love--through the love of others, or fantasies, or some other dream-like manifestation that has absolutely nothing to do with them. kinda like a mercedes comparing itself to a BMW to define its excellence, or luxury. your love is your love...and has nothing to do with anyone else.:)

    nice.
     
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    :) thank you... I was thinking of what an "outsider" had the gall to say about something they know nothing about....
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    When love take flight it's unbound , what's for you is for you
    every height is sweetly beautiful one that only those two can manifest.

    Awesome script of love...........thankz 4 sharing
     
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    Dearest Sister Poet Alyce,

    Marvelous! This piece speaks volumes. I was shaking my head yes in agreement all the way through. It's so good to read you. Yes, he is all yours. Congrats on your upcoming beautiful day "bride to be." I am so happy for you.

    (smile)
     
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    (can it be that I'm speechless right now?) :luv: Thank you so much for the love Sista TotalView! Your kindness blesses my heart so!
     
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