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  1. Desert Storm

    Desert Storm Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Absence of mind
    the state of i'm in
    orbid
    void longing to fill intently looking to
    looking on
    looking up
    longing to fill that space
    that space
    that space
    absence of mind
    inadequately searching
    pain shooting up my spine
    i'm loosing my
    my
    my ....
    looking on
    looking up
    that place
    was my place
    my place
    my home
    my santurary
    no one can know
    sometimes i find myself
    thinking aloud
    then thinking in my sleep
    thinking in my footsteps
    that walk along the lonely street
    street lights that illuminate my soul
    i know
    i feel
    your presence
    intently in my nature
    intently in my beauty
    creatively flow
    flow
    flow
    like rushing rapids
    and rainfalls
    rapping around the eternal
    rapping around the extrernal remedies
    flying in and out of space
    absence of mind
    free to erase the mystery inside
    longing for your darkness not in color but your unknowable side
    the things you hold in the mystery of your sin that i could not confide
    and though distant lands could not keep us apart
    though i try to love
    i try to search
    i love
    love love
    thee ever loving thee so much
    internally checking for errors but erasing the mistakes
    to comprehend you
    i try but
    it takes time to embrace me....
     
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    baller Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Do you mind?
    I mean…really
    do you…really
    Do
    You
    Do you mind
    If mine
    Is the look that looks you
    To
    On
    Up
    Looks you
    Up and down
    Do you?
    Would you visit my home
    My place
    My…
    Visit me
    …My sleep
    Feel me…mentally
    Creep
    Deep
    In your secret place
    Your place
    Your space
    Your you inside your face
    That I might taste
    The you I’ve known before
    Longed for more
    Wronged
    But pray that right
    Is there
    Somewhere.

    Embracing you.

    been too long since i've read you.:)

    interesting obstruct
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    wow.......feeling all this too , had my pen jumpin to respond
    love how you capture my mind on this and brother Baller took it on home ....

    welcome back DS....
     
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    creeking past the crickety wooden steps
    creeking...
    creeking...
    squeeky hinges...
    maybe a saloon...
    antique must
    solid oak rust ...
    my footsteps tip toe through the crickety steps
    every steps
    creeking...
    creeking...
    down the hall...
    open shut
    the squeeky door slat
    slightly upheld on hinges
    but barely erect
    vacant room
    where once players played
    and ladies latched to their gents...
    do i mind?
    yet i do though i don't i do
    somewhat...? and yet thank u rich
    blessings...
     
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