Black Poetry : Untitled..

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  1. skuderjaymes

    skuderjaymes Contextualizer Synthesizer MEMBER

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    She said to me, "I love you, but.."
    and I stopped her, grabbed the love
    and ran.. it was all I really wanted anyway;
    told her she could keep the rest.



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    runaway love indeed
     
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    Peace skuder....
    Long time no read, but I can see you still have a way with words.
    This tiny scribe speaks volumes on so many levels. I don't blame
    you..... I would have took the love and ran too. lol
    So nice to read you again.

    Much Peace & Luv,
    4EVER:heart:
     
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    Brother Poet Skuderjaymes,

    Wonderful. I love the honesty, the brevity and the childlike energy. This piece says what it has to say and then gets out of its own way. You know me though...wondering, what could have possibly come behind that "but" (smile) Truly enjoyed the read.
     
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    you know what i mean? can we be that honest? short sweet and complete and yet that love keeps you coming back for more... is it love?
     
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    Where did you go 4EVERLUV? We miss you here.
     
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    Missing Love always leads to a little kissing.
    Your words of love are intriguing to say the least.
     
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    lol...sounds like a move I would do...hey take the love all the 'buts' in the world can't stop what you really feel...liked this short and concise right to the point...keep writing my brother
     
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