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  1. tay_tay225

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    You think I’m pretty and smart
    And kind and an all around good person
    You constantly tell me all the good things about me
    And do what you can to help me.
    Now I must ask myself,
    What is it I love about you?
    Perhaps I’ve never truly thought about it.
    Because you will never be mine
    Because we are so close, but so far away
    And the idea of ever being yours
    Is undeniably far-fetched.

    “Talking.”
    Talking is all we have.
    I’m tired of just talking, but I never want to say goodbye.
    Because if I do that, we’ll have nothing

    Am I so concerned with how others will perceive this
    THIS – whatever THIS is
    That I can’t tell you what it is I need to tell you
    That I can’t do what I need to do.
    Whatever those things even are!
    It took me so much courage just to make this for someone
    Who I can’t see.

    Or am I simply afraid of how it might make me feel
    To get so involved with someone who’s never right in front of me.
    It’s going to drive me crazy.
    What am I supposed to do!?
    Am I supposed to wait and half-kill myself
    Wait and wait when I have no idea what the result will be!
    I think I might just die inside
    If in the end, you STILL don’t belong to me.

    Or am I supposed to end it now and try to move on
    Probably constantly regretting the decision I made.
    Is that even possible for me?
    Is it even possible to leave you alone?
    Or will I fail like before?

    I’m so lost
    I've no clue what direction I’m supposed to take
    All I want to do is find the dead end
    And hope I can agree with whatever’s waiting for me.
     
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    feeling you so soul deep been there before , follow da heart and gut feelings
    as it guide yo emotions .....this was very well expressed
    lovin ya writing style tay tay !
     
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    Thank you so much.

    This is as much fun as it was 5 years ago. :)
     
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    indeed just happy to see ya having poetic fun , poetry is always delightful
     
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