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Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Rashad, Jan 24, 2002.

  1. Rashad

    Rashad Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Idolitorized mind
    despise the soul
    in my eyes
    Hate me cause
    blatantly I speak
    deeply into the
    soul and seek...
    Scared mind
    bound by
    foolishness
    foolishly speaking
    foolishly seeking
    foolishly living
    *****!
    You just a foolish
    *** *****!
    Reminds me
    of my past
    taking life
    for granted
    while
    feet panted
    quickly to
    situations
    leading to
    fustration
    causing
    irratation
    to the mind
    spirit
    & soul
    while
    Stories unfold
    of desperate
    feelings and
    emotions
    setting poetry
    in motion
    at the same
    time
    wanting to
    educate the
    young black
    youth
    with truth
    untold
    not sold
    over the counter...
    So I encounter
    Knowledge and
    wisdom
    in hopes that
    I can
    acquire
    before
    my mind
    retires
    my desire
    is to
    encourage
    the young
    black man
    to understand
    the Spirit man...
    So stop being
    so hard
    recognize the
    Love in your
    heart
    tear down the
    walls that's
    holding you back
    cause in fact
    you holding us
    all back
    Black.

    (Hope to offend anyone with this piece.)
     
  2. MapleXtract

    MapleXtract Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Oh $hyt...

    What could I say.
    This piece has so
    much rhythm, I
    heard it being re-
    cited to me as I
    read it to myself.
    Just an amazing
    spit, poet...
     
  3. Danilyn

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    I feel the anger and frustration...

    I hope that releasing what was in you on paper has helped you to deal. I know what's up, and I know it's hard, but let the spirit lead...
    Love ya sweetie!
     
  4. mizdee2002

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    like miz maple, i can hear you reciting this flow. the [email protected] thang is tyte brutha..keep it going!

    til saturday!!!!
    dee
     
  5. Rashad

    Rashad Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thanks Fam!

    Preciate the Love on this piece!
    Much love.
    :)
     
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    Rashad...

    No offense dawg!!!

    This jawnt was straight like that bro!!!

    :peace:
    GQ
     
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    hey poet :mad:

    i am truly offened by this piece....simply because i had not thought of it first... :peace:

    tight scribe poet...your craft is groing stonger...all that couped up in you? Bro' you really need to drop some more scribe on da page cuz yo pen is red hot cha-know?

    five mics and a pair of black fist for this one bro'

    one.
     
  8. Rashad

    Rashad Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    GQ

    Preciate ya bruh!:toast:
     
  9. Rashad

    Rashad Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Dnommo

    Thanks fo da Love.
    I'll try to keep dropp'n nem fo ya!
    Keep Hot!
    Thanks for reading.:)
     
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    Rashad.


    ...i see you are letting the flow lead! :)

    & i could feel it thru-out this entire piece.
    keep writing from the heart my brotha...
    & the only way for someone/anyone to
    be offended... would be if your truth hit
    'em in da face!! :D write on poet!!

    :heart:
    SunShyne~
     
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