Black Poetry : Untitled

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  1. UnknownPoet

    UnknownPoet Member MEMBER

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    This was written by a friend of mine.... coincidentally.. she wrote it for me..





    Him...



    He intrigued me

    Every inch of his chocolate skin enticed me

    You know, like having a snickers bar for the first time?

    Yea… that good.

    But there was more…

    He intrigued me

    It was as if I could count the stars in his eyes…

    His smile was warm like the perfect summer's day

    His breath lingered in the air like the sweetest bush of roses

    And his voice?

    Mmmm his voice…

    It resonates like the sound of an angel from above

    And caresses my body with the gentle touch that only a man has

    Yes… He intrigued me…

    But it was more than the physical

    He was an intellectual

    His line turned into small talk…

    Which grew into conversation…

    Which evolved into… paradise…

    He made love to my mind in a way that I had never experienced before

    The deeper it got, the deeper he went

    he hit that spot that can only be hit when the sex is good

    the spot that leaves you breathless…

    and that's how he left me

    breathless… speechless… but oh so satisfied....​
     
  2. queentswana

    queentswana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Wow,
    She seem to have found her "Heaven" ...right here on earth, I can relate, great piece poet!
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    welcome and very well written unto thee that is ...wow
     
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