Black Poetry : unTITLED

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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    THE HEART AND SOUL OF MISERIES PAST
    WHICH ALL WE TOLD WAS DEAD AT LAST
    THE BEAST WE THOUGHT TO DUST HAD TURNED
    ITS SOLDIERS CAUGHT ITS FLAG WAS BURNED
    THE REIGN WE PRAYED HAD FOUND DEATH'S BED

    TO CHASE THE MEEK THE TRUTH ENSLAVED
    DEVOUR THE WEAK AND SLAY THE BRAVE
    BEHOLD THE FIRE!
    CRIES FEAR FROM MEN
    THE SOUL EMPIRE !
    RISES AGAIN WITH PIERCING PAIN
    AND LASHING FORCE U HEAR THE SOUNDS
    THE CRACKIN' WHIP
    THE WOUND IS FLESH
    THE BLOOD IS WARM
    SLOWLY IT DRIPS IN UNTOLD GROUNDS
    U CREEP AWAY U DRESS YA WOUNDS
    TYME GOES BY THE WOUND
    HEAL BUT A SCAR REMAIN AND FREEDOM
    BECOME A GIFT BY HEART WITH SOUL THATS LIFE
     
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    Dayuuum $R!!!!!

    Ya hittin' us up from a different angle!!!

    Deep flow ~ still in top flight!!!

    Peace
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    GQ MAN I'M WAY UP HIGH LOOKING LOW
    UPON LAND I SEE IT LIKE THAT!
    THANX A MILLION $$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$
     
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    This one is nice. :uzi:
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    THANX TRYING TO GET THROUGH THE STORM.....
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    Why you always give me these so sarcastic faces.! I'm trying to be real! hee hee hee
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    now Rich whats the matter
    tell ya honey
     
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    HEY STORM HERE HOW IS THIS ONE
     
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    HONEY I AM JUST FLOWIN' FROM THE MIND
    THROUGH THE HEART TOO THE SOUL ...
    THANX SIS.......A MILLION TYMES
     
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    Richard

    Of all the poems I have read from you, this one is the most powerful. I had to read this more than once. Do not make light of this when I say...this poem was written with prophetic intensity. You wrote this back in Feb. but it is strangely very timely now...many of the lines in this piece are poetic reflections of the present state of things.



    I enjoyed the clarity and straightforward strength of this poem.

    Thanks for sharing...fixing ta turn in for da nite.
     
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