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  1. jus_dat_nice

    jus_dat_nice Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Illegible emotions in my mind's abyss
    Instigated by a virtual kiss and a burst of lyricism
    That translates to yet another grin on my face
    Never again I once more swore but that was before
    He stumbled into my path where it met with his at a crossroads
    And we embarked on a journey together until we wondered off roads
    Into unexpected territory yet we know we're heading for eternity
    We joined hands and got high off each other's thoughts
    Until our feet left the ground and we ventured from reality
    I fell into you and you into me
    And we ended up somewhere awe-inspiring
    And since our love is far from provincal
    It thrived in the place that was only ours
    With a futuristic backdrop displaying
    Visions of us together experiencing unconventional love in its purest form
    That not even blind prophets and gifted oracles can predict the magnitude of
    But he and I can see easily and spew it like it's the truth
    Though only we can see it clearly
    Even through the hazy fog of our intoxicating love
    We easily survive the largest tornados, tsunami, and hurricanes
    Only to rise in the aftermath unscaved and doper than ever
    While the heathenous tormentors lie in ruins
    Higher we rise until we can kickback on the sun's surface
    Proving the world should revolve around us
    As we are associated with royalty
    Crowned the King and Queen of made up kingdoms
    We can challenge animosity and triumph over pessimissim
    Through cheery rose-colored outlook we can see the future is bright
    The best has yet to come
    For we will unite with the force of a million missles
    Immersed in just as many joyful tears
    Because dams couldn't hold back the swell of emotion that would transpire between us two
    When his arms wrap around me and we experience each other physically
    The world order will rearrange to give us room on top
    However, until that moment in time
    My inked body graffiti will have suffice for closeness to you
    And my love will carry on
    Until kingdom come
    And beyond
     
  2. 4EVERLUV

    4EVERLUV Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    jus_dat_nice:
    This is a wonderful write. I found myself
    smiling and smh through the entire piece.
    We should all be able to experience such
    a connection of hearts. I always enjoy
    reading you.


    Much Luv
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    This was beautifully written , as it echoes deep in my soul a connection of two hearts
    beatin like one has my heart jumping fast love the flow sis........
     
  4. Rashad

    Rashad Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Very good post poet
    Experiencing the Journey
    of two hearts as one
    thru life's ups & downs
    Diggn this fo sho!
     
  5. jus_dat_nice

    jus_dat_nice Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thank you 4EVERLUV
    finding love is hard to do but it's such a beautiful experience
    thank you again for reading
    much love


    you're always so kind $$RICH$$ :)
    i'm glad you enjoyed my work
    much love


    thanks for reading rashad
    im glad you liked it
    much love
     
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    cocobutterskyn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    intensity of love...

    Jus, this is a beautiful write!
    I received great enjoyment in reading it.

    Thank you!


    MaddSistahlyLove!
    Coco:heart:
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    When we find that one who is right for us, it is as though a key has unlocked one of the most sacred treasures in the world, and no other 2 people could know of such bliss. How beautiful poetess.
     
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    Da Street So'ja Banned MEMBER

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    wow

    feelin' ya poet

    there is no justice here where this piece has no title

    especially a piece that shows love conquers all

    peace JDN:SuN034:
     
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