Black Short Stories : Untitled

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  1. beautifulblkw

    beautifulblkw Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I would love some feedback, this is the first time I have ever shown any thing that I have written to anyone other that a Professor. Hope you enjoy


    :spin: They had been seeing each other for some time now. She was intrigued by him. However, like so many other women she was scared, no only getting hurt but that she might, just might enjoy herself. The truth was, he had no intentions of hurting her. He found what he was looking for and he was not about to lose it.........................all he needed to know was that she was ready to take their relationship to that next stage.......

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    When she answered the door, he wasted no time, grabbing her waist and pulling her close. Usually she would have heisted, however she knew just what he wanted. Before they reached the living room he turned her around and slowly but aggressively kissed the back of her neck. She began to melt. The warmth of her middle started to overwhelm her, as he continued to kiss and rub her in all the right spots. He started to lick on her B E A U T I............. at the small of her back. She felt as if she would explode and she wanted to. Bending her over allowing her to feel all of his manhood, she would.




    :spin: Thank you for allowing me to share
     
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    Hotep beautifulblkw!!!

    Sounds like the start of a pretty HOT erotic novel:em3400:

    Keep Flowing and Thank You for honoring the Destee Family as your public 'coming out' place. :10600:


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    very sensual and warm sound like she ready and look to be a
    great start to an erotica tale spin.
     
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    Quite passionately intriguing, gives the reader an edge of your seat, so what happens next feeling. Well written for sure.
     
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    Hey beautifulblkw
    Wonderful read. I really enjoyed how you took your time
    in setting the pace. Great read and very romantic!

    Peace~N~Love
     
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    Peace family.............................. Much thanks
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    Please...continue to read




    Lying across the bed she replayed the events that just happen over and over again. She wasn't sure how she felt at this moment, but she knew she enjoyed every minute of it. He was the first man to make her feel this comfortable to be as free as possible. She experienced something new and wanted more. She was free and her mind would go place she never thought existed. She was sexually liberated.
     
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