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  1. aklah

    aklah New Member MEMBER

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    My first post....

    I wish I could fly away
    Leaving all worries behind.
    Elevating to my highest potential
    As do the daises in the spring.
    You'll be able to look up at me
    And admire my beauty.
    My beauty peerless to any holder of such a thing.
    Much like a rainbow after the storm.

    I could soar across the skies.
    The birds would be my neighbors
    And you, the wind beneath my wings.
    I'll glide into your dreams
    And leave gentle footprints on your heart
    Bringing our souls together.
    United as one.
    Unitil the end of time.

    Maybe I'll fly as high as the stars.
    They'll teach me to light my darkness
    And give a sense of hope.
    I'll meet my dreams along the Big Dipper
    And find my Midnight prancing near the North Star
    Clearing my mental bondage
    Thus finding my own voice.
    The voice within.​
     
  2. PLATINUMILLITY1

    PLATINUMILLITY1 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I can tell you that it is there
    I can say that maybe you have just
    lost track of where.....
    Maybe you Hide from it yourself
    Or just forgot the place you left it
    and just need a little help
    If you are ready
    Then that is all you need
    To rise and Fly Away
    Like Birds to the south
    Continuing Life
    Destination- your Dreams
    Only you know
    Who you can truly be
    But I see the good in you
    I see you lifted
    Free yourself and Lift your VOICE
    Embrace Love that you are Gifted


    :hiya: Welcome to Destee Aklah.... It is Very Wonderful to have you:love:
    ~PeaceandLove~
    and
    ~Blessings~

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  3. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This flowed so serenely, the visuals you penned took me there, to that peaceful space above the clouds. Your voice spoke quite clearly, I loved this.
    Welcome to Destee.com. Please familiarize yourself with our Forum Rules, as well as our Poetic Rules of Etiquette. Waiting to read more from you! :)
     
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    love this deep emotional piece my sista write on...........
     
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    hi aklah
    Welcome to the Family !

    What a wonderful and tranquil poem. It makes me want to travel
    To that next level. Wonderful poem very peaceful and lovely


    Peace~N~Love
     
  6. MRS. LADY

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    WELCOME.. GREAT POEM..... I HEAR YOUR VOICE FOR SURE...
     
  7. aklah

    aklah New Member MEMBER

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    Thank you for your insight.
    You make me feel so welcomed.:hiya:
     
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    wonderful imagery

    I wish i could be where youve written...i like the way this makes me feel so good...thanks!
     
  9. PLATINUMILLITY1

    PLATINUMILLITY1 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    And You so ARE!!!!!!!
    :love:
     
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    Beautiful poem, very peaceful and mellow. I wish that many times. Great write.
     
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