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Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by FattnBeautiful, Dec 14, 2007.

  1. FattnBeautiful

    FattnBeautiful Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    It's crazy how our wants over rides our minds.
    I have this want, this strong desire to be held by you.
    I know this want,
    this desire cannot come to pass
    but I want to feel your hands on my body.

    I want to feel your lips on my lips
    A passionate kiss that breaths in all of you
    with the brush of our tongues
    and the slow and eager movements of our mouths.
    I look in your eyes and
    I see that want reflict in mine
    and I begin to feel a tightness that I never felt before
    And I want to devour you

    I want to feel the full and hardness of you
    in my mouth and my tongue

    I want to hear you moan in pleasure and scream my name
    And it is getting harder and harder to resist my wants
    My want to lose my fingers in your long thick hair
    and gently but forcefully pull that hair
    feeling you quiver
    hearing the sound of pure ecstasy ecscape your lips.

    I want to hear how much you want me,
    how much you crave and long to be inside of me
    to feel my wetness around you.

    I want so badly to feel you inside of me
    To be able to rap my legs around your waist
    and feel you enter me slowly and carefully.
    I want to look in your eyes as you ride me to bliss.
    [email protected] I want you.

    I want you to ride me faster, ride me harder.
    I want you to make me cum.
    I want to hear pleasure,
    feel you cum as I squeez around you
    holding your hair tighter
    pulling it harder
    feeling the movements of your hips change
    as you get closer.

    I want this.
    I want you.
     
  2. Bluewater

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    Hi Sister FattnBeautiful
    Your pen is indeed on fire, wow!
    This is indeed a roller coaster
    with deep dips, and wild turns. wow!
    Nice write sis. Pick a title for your poem
    It's always good to name our creation.
    It's our babies..lol.. Much love
    This is one steamy flow

    Peace~N~Love
     
  3. FattnBeautiful

    FattnBeautiful Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank you Bluewater for your comment.
    I am not sure though what to call it.
    I am open to suggestions.
     
  4. LovesDestiny

    LovesDestiny Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Sometimes things are more simple than they appear..."I want" as a title would crown this steamy flow. My sister, I thoroughly enjoy your work!!! I'm always left with my mouth hanging wide open after I read your work. This is another excellent write!!!!
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    here's a title fo ya !

    I want / i need

    this was hot and u got me all of me take me now .....smile
     
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