Black Poetry : Untitled

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by FattnBeautiful, Dec 10, 2007.

  1. FattnBeautiful

    FattnBeautiful Well-Known Member MEMBER

    Joined:
    Nov 23, 2007
    Messages:
    106
    Likes Received:
    1
    Location:
    Philadelphia
    Ratings:
    +1
    I want you to taste me

    I want your tongue in the deepest part of me

    I want you to lick and savor every drop

    I want you to make me scream don't stop, don't stop

    I want you to taste me

    I want you to have me for breakfast, lunch, dinner and dessert

    I want my juices to flood out of me

    I want you to taste me

    Hold my hips and brace me for your tongue twisting ecstasy

    I want you to taste me

    I know your dying to

    I want you to taste me

    Because I know I want to taste all of you
     
  2. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

    Country:
    United States
    Joined:
    Oct 4, 2003
    Messages:
    16,340
    Likes Received:
    114
    Location:
    Northeast
    Ratings:
    +122
    Dripping with sensuality in every line poetess.
    FattnBeautiful,
    While I am enjoying your poetic scribes, each poet is limited to having a maximum of 5 pieces on the front page of the Get Your Flow On Forum. Right now you have 7 pieces. The exception to this rule is when the current Poet of the Week posts. That poet can flow at will during his/her week's reign. Please familiarize yourself with our Poetic Rules of Etiquette, http://destee.com/forums/showthread.php?t=11896, regarding this. Thank you.
     
  3. FattnBeautiful

    FattnBeautiful Well-Known Member MEMBER

    Joined:
    Nov 23, 2007
    Messages:
    106
    Likes Received:
    1
    Location:
    Philadelphia
    Ratings:
    +1
    Oh i see. I didn't notice sorry. Don't want to hog up the spot. Thank you for you comment.
     
  4. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

    Country:
    United States
    Joined:
    Oct 4, 2003
    Messages:
    16,340
    Likes Received:
    114
    Location:
    Northeast
    Ratings:
    +122
    Sister FattnBeautiful, thank you for understanding. I think your pen is on fire, and you have a need to write, which you do so expressively. We also have another poetry forum, the Quiet Peaceful Flow Lounge, http://destee.com/forums/forumdisplay.php?f=20, where you can post up to 4 pieces in a week's time. :)
     
  5. Da Street So'ja

    Da Street So'ja Banned MEMBER

    Joined:
    Jun 11, 2001
    Messages:
    7,648
    Likes Received:
    40
    Occupation:
    thrivin' spiritually/physically/emotionally/financ
    Location:
    where failure is not an option
    Ratings:
    +42
    um

    sista

    do you provide napkins wit dat

    lol
     
  6. LovesDestiny

    LovesDestiny Well-Known Member MEMBER

    Joined:
    Dec 10, 2007
    Messages:
    996
    Likes Received:
    18
    Occupation:
    Finance & Endless Possibilities
    Location:
    Midwest
    Ratings:
    +18
    FattnBeautiful, ghurl!!!!! You sho know how to turn up the HEAT!!!!!!
     
Loading...
Similar Threads - Untitled
  1. Desert Storm
    Replies:
    2
    Views:
    372
  2. $$RICH$$
    Replies:
    2
    Views:
    430
  3. YingYang11
    Replies:
    1
    Views:
    412
  4. asimplepoet
    Replies:
    4
    Views:
    450
  5. Desert Storm
    Replies:
    3
    Views:
    552